Chapter 2: The ingenious plan for an on purpose accidental encounter
As they entered the living room, they hardly noticed the mess they had left behind the previous night.
"Gacchan, Gacchan, doko ni desu~?" Nira spontaneously blabbered out most of her Japanese knowledge. Her dream with Ueda had been incredible, but it could never, no how beat
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maybe cuz i was picturing gackt bringing you sugar in a teaspoon with this crazy smile and *enter awkward silence*
now for criticism... just kidding lololol. k wait, i think by 'hontou ga' you meant 'hontou ka' but only 'hontou' would've worked as well ne~ and as for the doko bit, either 'doko desu~?' or 'doko ni imasu/iru no' would be more grammatically correct. but ANYWAY. i'm not gonna correct the english since it's Nira we're talking about here xDDDDDD
it's good guys. your conversations are cute <33
ps. it better really be gackt next door =P
ps2. hyde should come visit XD
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And no.. It would be better not to mess with Nira's English xD I know what can happen if you do, trust me: it isn't pretty :P
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Ghehehe.. Nah, I'm just too lazy to correct (or see) mistakes sometimes. Plus, people have a right to know that English is my second language xD
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SUGOI!!! (no, not the holy thing Nira :P)
And until I read that nan's hentai mood was on, I hadn't noticed anything, 'cause that's just bad... BAD!!! >< But well, since I don't mind that :P, keep up the good work ^^
Anonymous ("You don't know what this is, do ya?" :P)
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"...I can't ask him for something futile like sugar when he's shirtless.."
So funny! Aww...I wish you can write more of this. I want to link this fanfic to my blog, hope you don't mind. I'll comment again when it's done.
- Misao / Deafening
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We'll post up Chapter 3 shortly (I'll be seeing nan IRL this afternoon ^^) and I'll push her ass to work with me on Chapter 4. Finally there's more people waiting so *whee*spazz*
~ Nira
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