Chapter 2

Nov 04, 2007 10:13



Chapter 2: The ingenious plan for an on purpose accidental encounter

As they entered the living room, they hardly noticed the mess they had left behind the previous night.
"Gacchan, Gacchan, doko ni desu~?" Nira spontaneously blabbered out most of her Japanese knowledge. Her dream with Ueda had been incredible, but it could never, no how beat ( Read more... )

fanfic, 2, chapter

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problemchild518 November 4 2007, 09:59:02 UTC
FWAHAHAHA i loved the sugar part. I CAN'T GO OVER AND ASK HIM FOR SUGAR! HOW CAN I ASK HIM FOR SUGAR! it cracked me up i dunno why.

maybe cuz i was picturing gackt bringing you sugar in a teaspoon with this crazy smile and *enter awkward silence*

now for criticism... just kidding lololol. k wait, i think by 'hontou ga' you meant 'hontou ka' but only 'hontou' would've worked as well ne~ and as for the doko bit, either 'doko desu~?' or 'doko ni imasu/iru no' would be more grammatically correct. but ANYWAY. i'm not gonna correct the english since it's Nira we're talking about here xDDDDDD

it's good guys. your conversations are cute <33

ps. it better really be gackt next door =P
ps2. hyde should come visit XD

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fangirlsdiary November 21 2007, 21:10:23 UTC
Myeah.. I know some of the Japanese sucks, but we might need that feature later on ;) It would be pretty... non-stupid-plot-developping to be fluent at it :P Plus that my grammar still sucks and I tend to miss those kind of mistakes xD
And no.. It would be better not to mess with Nira's English xD I know what can happen if you do, trust me: it isn't pretty :P

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nira_yo November 23 2007, 22:21:40 UTC
Exactly. My English is just fine. Even when it's wrong. And all because I say so! Bwahahahaha!

Ghehehe.. Nah, I'm just too lazy to correct (or see) mistakes sometimes. Plus, people have a right to know that English is my second language xD

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anonymous November 5 2007, 20:36:22 UTC
Fine, I'll comment here...

SUGOI!!! (no, not the holy thing Nira :P)
And until I read that nan's hentai mood was on, I hadn't noticed anything, 'cause that's just bad... BAD!!! >< But well, since I don't mind that :P, keep up the good work ^^

Anonymous ("You don't know what this is, do ya?" :P)

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fangirlsdiary November 21 2007, 21:07:37 UTC
Hmm.. well, usually when people are called 'anonymous' I frankly have no idea, so.. no xD

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nira_yo November 23 2007, 22:19:25 UTC
It was someone that knows about the sugoi kureppu MSN convo we had quite a while back. And considering the proper spelling (double l's where they should be, as well as double n's xD) methinks that it's Runde-chan <3

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anonymous November 24 2007, 14:13:59 UTC
And right she is (not left, no!). Wow, Nira says I have proper spelling, w00t!!! lol :P

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anonymous December 6 2007, 18:13:24 UTC
I'm a fan of nan now. Haha.

"...I can't ask him for something futile like sugar when he's shirtless.."

So funny! Aww...I wish you can write more of this. I want to link this fanfic to my blog, hope you don't mind. I'll comment again when it's done.

- Misao / Deafening

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nira_yo December 8 2007, 08:47:23 UTC
Yes please for the linkage =DDD M(_ _)M

We'll post up Chapter 3 shortly (I'll be seeing nan IRL this afternoon ^^) and I'll push her ass to work with me on Chapter 4. Finally there's more people waiting so *whee*spazz*

~ Nira

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