Holy shit, this was awesome! I have to get up in six hours for work, and am way too tired to come up with anything more coherent, but this was wonderful: beautifully written and gorgeously illustrated, funny and occasionally wise. I really felt for Spencer, totally bewildered by Brendon; and Brendon himself: your characterisation here was inspired. Well done and thank you!
OH MAN. Seriously, this is AMAZING, and it made me so happy. Your pacing is perfect, your many narrators don't confuse the story at all, your integration of this with HP verse works so well, and THANK YOU for including Luna and Ginny and a number of other girls so this wasn't an all-boys story. Fantastic work.
It's been such a long time since I wrote anything over a couple of k's, so I was incredibly nervous about this working out. I'm really glad it did! And that you enjoyed the girls' inclusion as well -- all boys wouldn't have been quite as fun to write. :) (And, if I'm honest, I would have a hard time writing a HP story this long without including Luna at all...)
This was so awesome! Wow. My favorite part was probably Brendon the (faux) slytherin mastermind (!), but I also really love that you involved them in the diary/Ginny thing. It was a total surprise, and it worked so well with the rest of the fic. :D
Thank you for this comment! (Or these comments. ;D) Brendon the evil genius (erhm) was great fun to write, and I'm glad that plotline worked. :) Glad that you enjoyed the diary storyline as well!
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It's been such a long time since I wrote anything over a couple of k's, so I was incredibly nervous about this working out. I'm really glad it did! And that you enjoyed the girls' inclusion as well -- all boys wouldn't have been quite as fun to write. :) (And, if I'm honest, I would have a hard time writing a HP story this long without including Luna at all...)
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I'm so glad you liked it! And about the rest of the years... well, I actually have a document entitled HogwartsAUY2 open on my computer right now. :D
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Also, I can't wait for Year Two. :DDDD
*smooches*
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Thank you again for all the help with this. Seriously awesome. :)
*smooch!*
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