this is amazing and very deep. I love it very much, but I also have to admit that it is a little complicated to read. I seriously had to stress my brain trying to understand some things, not because it was badly written (God no, it's fucking fantastic!) but the way is very difficult. I'm incredibly curious to find out what will happen next and I will happily get a headache from reading it, though! But I think for people who are less comfortable with English this might be really heavy! Maybe it's something about the white on black or the font, I'm not sure. Either way I hope to read more soon.
Ah actually I figured it out, it's because you don't put these little fuckers in where they should be --> ,,, (idk their name in English sorry xD)), I don't mean to diss I really love this but more people should comment because it's lovely, would you like me to put those in for you where needed, though?
Yes please, though I'm not exactly sure what you're referring to sorry XD you made so many comments that i'm not used to seeing i got confused XD thank you SO much for your kind words about my story you really kind of inspired me to continue this story. <3
You are really welcome and I will help promote this story because it really is a little piece of art that many of my friends would appreciate. Whenever you want me to beta the story you can just send me an instant message and I will quickly revise it for you.<3
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