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Home (My Heart Is With You) ♣ Original Prompt | Part 4

Apr 17, 2016 04:58

( Yixing inhales deeply when he sets foot out of his company's building. )

second wave

Comments 3

olympianlove April 17 2016, 04:44:39 UTC

AWWW THIS WAS ADORABLE!! Just the thought of Yifan with pretty blue eyes and cat ears... EEEE SO CUTE!!

cwtchbuddy April 25 2016, 16:31:20 UTC

Oh god, where do I even begin??? (What did I do to deserve such thanks??!!?? I don't remember doing anything@-@ This is all you Kira!) Anyway, umm, gaaaahhh I think you already know how I feel about this fic as you've given me the privilege to read the first part in the works and I immediately rolled over the fact that this has catboy!Yifan nyaaaaa~ I just adore Fanxing as hybrids and I think you write so well for this concept (Exhibit A: Wolf Hybrid Yifan for KFX) as you did not only include a good amount of CUTE in this, it was also fucking hot once you reach the last part…I'm still speechless 'til now but we'll get there! First, let's discuss the fact that OH MY GOD YOU KNOW HOW WEAK I AM FOR YIFAN WILL SILVER HAIR OH DEAR SAVE ME! And such beautiful green eyes, oh Lord I can only imagine but the combination of those would make Yifan look like an utter fluff AND the hotness that he is *drools* I like that you wrote a part of their childhood and their growing up phase! You already know how I reacted about "Yixing" being Yifan's ' ( ... )

cwtchbuddy April 25 2016, 16:32:50 UTC

Plus points for their first time not being during Yifan's heat! But even more plus points for that heat smut! GOD DAMN IT! I knew about the list of 'acts' BUT OH MY GOD, EVEN THAT WASN'T ENOUGH TO PREPARE ME!! I like that there was a time jump as I would have felt weird for them quickly doing all of that stuff (As I'm sure Yixing would have helped Yifan in his heat eventually but also gradually). Needy Yifan always gives me life! He's never portrayed as one (or there are only a few that shows that as he's always the 'dominant' one in the r/s). RIGHT TO DILDO! Yifan, of course, would relieve himself while waiting for Yixing. I for sure loved all the sexual acts shown here and how you didn't rush to Yixing fucking Yifan right away and clearly showed what actually goes down during heats (and of course, that gives me more porn, OH EM GEE I WAS GRINNING LIKE A MADWOMAN WHILE READING THE PART WHERE YIXING WAS EATING OUT YIFAN - goodness why did I put that in all caps ( ... )