Title: “Toys for Boys” (1/3)
Rating: NC-17
Summary: You would be amazed by what technology can do these days! Brian/Justin from Brian's point of view.
Disclaimer: It all belongs to CowLip and Showtime. *eyeroll*
Feedback: Yes, please.
Author’s Note: Harmless PWP, because
happier_bunny demanded porn. References things that happened in 105, but it is set in early
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This was hot... and beautiful... and hot.
As an aside, I never really understood why Cowlip chose to shred Altoona's reputation to shreds, lol. It's not such a bad place. Certainly no better than MANNNY of the suburbs of the Burgh... lol. But that's a huge digression, lol.
thanks for sharing :)
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Couldn't agree with you more.
Altoona' reputation to shreds
I think it was just the meter of the phrase Brian said "backslapping breeders from Altoona" which has a 3-2-1-X syllable structure. Sort of calls out for another 3 to make it fit metrically, and Altoona was a 3 that sounded funnier than Harrisburg. (Sorry, probably more than you ever wanted to know.)
Thanks for sharing.
You're very welcome. Thanks for the lovely feedback.
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*giggles* I think you're absolutely delightful, and I love your stuff too. Thanks.
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(tbc) *squee!*
Also, to prove that I did actually read it and not just skim to the porn :D I like that you've re-introduced Telson as a (potential) Kinnetic client and that Brian's a little stressed about it.
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You are officially my first ever GUH comment. Thank you, and congrats on being first!
I like that you've re-introduced Telson
I'll admit that one of my kinks is work!fic for Brian. I love getting into his work scene and messing around with what we know of life at Ryder, Vanguard and Kinnetik. Seems that works for you too--nifty!
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Oh I'm a big fan of work!Brian. If you ever feel the need to exercise the kink, I'm there :D
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Thanks! and many thanks to happier_bunny whose single request has inspired lots of good hot porn today!
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I'm so excited!!! hee
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Couldn't agree more. Turned-on Brian is a thing of beauty ("and a joy forever" Justin!muse adds). I'm happy you liked it so well.
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Why thank you! My bent is plot and character, but I can write pure action when one of the flist demands it the need arises.
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