Fic for kaleidopy

Jun 12, 2008 22:16

Title: Night Vigil
For kaleidopy
By roh_wyn
Characters: Faramir, Boromir, Ithilien Rangers, Imrahil, Denethor, Gandalf
Rating: G
Genre: General
Warnings: None.

kaleidopy had requested: A pre-ring story. I'm easy to please.

Night Vigil )

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lindahoyland June 13 2008, 22:31:24 UTC
A delightful story with a great twist at the end!

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roh_wyn June 13 2008, 23:30:18 UTC
Thanks!

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illwynd June 14 2008, 02:05:52 UTC
Oh wow, I did not see that ending coming after the heavy suspense of the first part! Very cute--I can totally see the brothers teaming up to try to cheer up dear Denethor, and succeeding. Wonderful!

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roh_wyn June 14 2008, 15:32:04 UTC
Thanks! I'm all about the red herring. (Er, fish pun wholly unintended).

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kaleidopy June 14 2008, 03:22:23 UTC
I adored this story. From the very start I suspected the brothers were hunting something evil or dangerous. I would have never guessed the outcome. Even Denethor took me by surprise.

A very well-written story. I loved the suspense at the beginning and the twist you added at the end. Great storytelling! You did an outstanding job. Thank you for writing it for me.

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roh_wyn June 14 2008, 15:32:38 UTC
Oh, I'm glad you liked it! I was a bit worried that you might not like it. :)

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alexajohnson June 14 2008, 16:50:17 UTC
oh! that was absolutely, positively delightful! and you had me completely fooled too!
thank you so much for participating! =)

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roh_wyn June 23 2008, 19:10:25 UTC
Thanks. I enjoyed writing it too! Thanks for running this exchange for us!

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lady_branwyn June 21 2008, 02:11:26 UTC
This is marvelous! You had me fooled. I especially love Imrahil's ominous thought that If nothing else, he might be needed for some sort of rearguard action. And the vision of the two attackers speeding out of the darkness toward their quarry--hee!

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roh_wyn June 23 2008, 19:10:53 UTC
Heh. I like that bit too, though I admit that Imrahil line was a bit sneaky! ;)

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