Fic for butterballer

[alexajohnson]

And last, but definitely not least! :D

Title: The Long Race
For butterballer
By lady-brawyn
Characters: Faramir, Eowyn, Eomer, Elfhelm, OCs
Rating: Mature
Genre: Het
Warnings: Nudity, sexual situations, innuendos involving onions

butterballer had requested: “Eomer smelling like onions.”

Comments

[enkemeniel]

*LOL* Nice!!! Love it!

[sarasrati34]

hahaha, I'm reading this at work (sh!) and my boss just looked in and gave me a funny look when she saw me grinning like an idiot. Very sweet (in a, you know, manly and onion-smelling sort of way)!

[little_dwarf]

I've always thought that Faramir had to prove himself in front of Eomer and the other Rohirrim, but I have to admit your take on it was most original! :) What can I say? Onions will *never* be the same for me! And the image of a Steward of Gondor and a King of the Mark engaged in a fierce battles of onions will haunt me for some time! :))

Your characterization was perfect, and I also loved the brief appearance of Eowyn... I doubt she would have to chop vegetables herself, though. She's royalty, and royalty don't chop onions. Do they? :))

Apart from the original idea, I really admired your style - extremely good writing, with those small details given from time to time to create the atmosphere... And very believable dialogue!

A great fic that I absolutely loved! :)