Biola University Admissions Essay

[farewell_05]

Upon applying to Biola, I have to write an essay. Here is the prompt and my rough draft. Gimme some feedback yo.

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Using specific examples, describe your spiritual growth during
the recent years.

Job was a blameless man of integrity. He feared God and shunned evil. Because of this, Satan proposed a theory to God claiming

Comments

[farewell_05]

My biggest concerns are that I dont want it to seem that I am looking for pitty, or that I do not stay on topic enough.

[emohour]

Best thing ive read in forever.

God really worked on me through those words.

Thank you.

[dawnica]

for reals. That was actually very very good. And I think it was something I needed to read right now. Thanks, and good job.

[farewell_05]

:)
Thanks yoz.