a story in progress.

[fashonablygrfik]

haven't written in a while, i know.

the quick version: still not getting laid, frequency of masturbation has increased, espescially in these last three weeks.

but, just so not to bore you, i have a part of a story. i want to make it part of a larger novella. and i'm still trying to write the Rules of Conversation that are referred to. i see it

Comments

[squarebox]

Wow, I was really surprised and happy to see a new post from you (even if it is a week old now). I return now and then to your older ones and really enjoy them.

I think the big thing, which you get at in your introduction, is that this would work better as part of a larger whole. It's hot, and as always you know how to summarize sex by hitting the high points, giving a few close details that let me imagine all the rest. The only problem is that it's hard to get at exactly what's going on because of the, what, cultural differences you might call them? Which is why a larger story would work better: more chance for the reader to get used to it.

The image is great, just like your "a party" story. Thank you kindly for posting your writing again, and please please please keep it up!

[just_micky]

hiya babes hey i love your icon its so hot

[manchowda]

hey,
i like your writing.
I'm adding you to my friends
please add me back?
thanks

[manchowda]

I just read that again and it IS very good!
So where have you been and what have you been doing?
I hope you've been masterbating...atleast 5 or 6 times a day?
xxx
manchowda