The Art of Seduction (Just Ask for What You Want)

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Title: The Art of Seduction (Just Ask for What You Want)
Chapter: 1/about3
Pairing: Puck/Sam (top/bottom)
Rating: 15 (R) for now
Summary: some blonde-haired blue-eyed all American newbie who keeps creeping into his dreams about Brittany, Santana and Quinn having a threesome, and pushing the girls aside so he can deep-throat him with that fucking huge

Comments

[geeky_ramblings]

I love this so far. From Puck realizing that he wants Sam to them making out. HOT! I can't wait for more!

[kolman8]

Totally on for Suck!
Your writing's great and I loved your description of Puck waking up.

[tommo11]

That was incredibly hot! I wasn't really a fan of Sam in the premiere but I must say, you made him hot!

[factionb]

This is as elegant as hot. And that's quite difficult, even more when it's writing about teenagers and about an everything-is-possible show like Glee.

Btw, I LOVED THIS SO BADLY! Omg yay, I cannot wait, I'm just going to read the second part :)

(and I missed Sam so much in 2x02, that was a disappointing fail)

[kurope]

That so didn't take me 20 minutes to find the "Leave a comment" button. Gosh no!

Okay! So. Wow. I adore the subtle characterization ticks like the voice you've given Puck. It's not totally insensitive, but he's clearly a boy. It's not wishy-washy either - he knows what he wants. Another thing is the fact you managed to slip in some FinnPuck at the start (I switch around between the three boys. OT3... >__>)

Sam was adorable. Poor baby. <333