Grey's Anatomy Fic: the space of all fractures

Mar 25, 2012 23:31

Guess what. I guess I feel things? Lots of things.

THE SPACE OF ALL FRACTURES
we both know what we are not. Cristina believes in merits sometimes, still.
grey’s anatomy. spoilers for one step too far | 3,047 words | pg | cristina/owen

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show: grey's anatomy, pairing: cristina/owen, character: cristina yang

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chrisfaithalin March 26 2012, 06:42:22 UTC
I really liked this. I thought it was an interesting look at the aftermath of Owen cheating. I loved how Cristina talked to Owen in the therapy session. Great job.

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ebonybeach March 26 2012, 08:27:23 UTC
Ooh, I really really liked this. Such beautiful prose. I like the Cristina/Meredith dynamic a lot, I think you really nailed it.

There are so many great lines but I especially liked: "What I want to say to you is this: I love you, but you are totally full of shit."

It isn't easy to say that. She has about nine different scenarios charging through her head; it is the who and the what and mostly, it's the who. She wants someone to blame. Then she doesn’t. She wonders stupid things like perfumes and offices and a little too much liquor here and there.

And also: "I'm lashing out," he says too.

She can't tell, she thinks. She can't tell if he's there, meaning it, or if he's there, testing her. This is the problem. This pulls her back to that feeling of vulnerability that she just can't seem to get away from. There is no stopping or going. I think that's really profound, wondering if he's testing her, and something one would definitely feel in her situation ( ... )

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tosca1390 March 26 2012, 17:41:13 UTC
WHY ARE YOU GIVING ME FEELINGS ABOUT THIS SHOW THAT I HAVEN'T WATCHED IN THREE YEARS.

WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME.

Damnit.

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nurse_stiney March 27 2012, 00:12:48 UTC
OH GOD YOU ALWAYS FIND NEW WAYS TO BRING OUT ALL MY FEELINGS ABOUT FANDOMS I SHOULD'VE GIVEN UP ON A LOOOOONG TIME AGO.
THIS WAS AMAZING AND PERFECT AND AAAAHHHHH THESE TWO. THESE TWOOOOOOOOOOO.

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natyu0815 March 28 2012, 03:34:46 UTC
I loved this. Very well written, and I can imagine them all doing all of this. n_n

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