every now and then the earth will decide it's high time for fire [5/5]

[kaiwynn]

every now and then the earth will decide it's high time for fire [5/5]
jasper/jane. jasper/bella, jane/alec, aro/jane. jasper/tanya, jasper/rosalie, aro/marcus, jasper/jane/alec. r. 5,386. [total]
He wanted to keep her, charm her with Southern chivalry and hold her hand like a delicate flower.
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Comments

[yoursolace]

KAIIIIII. my last present. heeeeeee. i suck and took forever (like you know) to finally get to this, but i don't really regret it because BD was a horror and pain to get through and this is my antidote. THIS WILL MAKE THINGS WIN AGAIN. i can guarantee you that.

warning beforehand (i'm going to snag my favorite lines as i read): this may get long. prepare for epic size. you know i can't sit around, reading fic, and not give a review the size of alaska or so. i am incapable. plus, your work always has me in incoherent flailing. and yes, i still love jasper/jane. i doubt i ever could stop liking these two. they're so WICKED, you know? and guuuuh.

OKAY, NOW I READ.

FSNHfJKSDHfk. HELLO JASPER HALE I LOVE YOU OMG. RAPE ME WITH YOUR EMOTIONS. <3__<3

The tiny silver phone is thrown like a pretty candy wrapper; he doesn't want to be tracked.

you know what? I HATE YOU AND YOUR PRETTY IMAGERY. GTFO. >:( in other words, i love that, i really do. pretty candy wrapper -- such a devine use of metaphor.

No, he decides. Somewhere different,

[kaiwynn]

HOLY CRAP BB I AM SQUEALING SO HARD OVER HERE.

NO REALLY. MY MOM JUST HEARD ME.

aksdhgahgadgadg i love you so much! you make me feel SO AWESOME and omggg, you are totally my inspiration. i mean, you kill me with your love. WE ARE BOTH DEAD NOW SEE. i write just for your lovely flaily hyperactive comments. i love to see you keymash bb lol

I LOVE YOU SO HARD. GODDD. I WANT TO SQUISH YOU RIGHT NOW. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR MAKING IT WORTH IT :DDD

[yoursolace]

LOL I LIVE TO MAKE YOU SQUEAL?

heeeee. i love giving fic authors the reviews they deserve! i know just how it is to get detailed reviews. it makes me all glow-y.

YOU ARE WELCOME. EVEN THOUGH I SHOULD BE THANKING YOU. HAHA.<333333

[kaiwynn]

AHHHHHH I LOVE YOU.

i'm just ^o^ right now. thassall.

[morlockiness]

she somehow gets them all in bed together.

This seems 100% plausible and I highly suggest you write a fic with it as the main focus. Great and fabulous as always, m'dear.

[kaiwynn]

really? jasper/jane/alec. interestingg.

[kaiwynn]

ahhh thank you! ^_^ i am so excited.

[bebitched]

Crazy amounts of uncannon pairings like woah. And I loved it. Every single word. Jasper's head is such a fascinating place to be, and I enjoyed these lines in particular:

The ellicit affairs stayed that way because by the next morning, he smelled different scents on the two women, scents that weren't his own. On one, a bear -- and on the other, distinctly, a mountain lion.

He wanted to keep her, charm her with Southern chivalry and hold her hand like a delicate flower. Other times he wanted to pin her down with rough strength, capturing her mouth like an island, bruising tender flesh and making it even softer.

For her sake he gets to know her brother, and after a casual, "He seems alright, I suppose," she somehow gets them all in bed together.

Beautiful piece of writing.

[kaiwynn]

ohh thank you. <33

[jacyevans]

He has finally released, surrendering to the storm and all its vicious tendencies. He has always been the rock, the one stable point, shouldering the blows of others' turmoil and attempting to remain the calm center. He has always been the balance.

The balance of power is tipping slowly and there's no way he can stop it.

Once again, so very, very Jasper, and so very, very perfect. Just like this entire fic :D

Damn you for making me like Jane. Seriously, woman! Wtf is that about?

[kaiwynn]

heeee! jane is awesome. you should like her!

i'm really glad you like this, though. <3