stuck inside an open door

[kaiwynn]

stuck inside an open door
edward/bella. jacob/bella. r. 303.
Fanciful fabrics draped around her skin feel like cheating.
for whoajessica's birthday. i love you a lot. i can't believe i'm writing e/b for you. but hey, you asked for angsty and THIS ALMOST MADE ME CRY OMG.
flist, if you're looking at this going wtf...it's her fault.

Comments

[lastupenda]

He can no longer read her mind (her face, more accurately, because it's so simple, really, easy as breathing).

i loved this line. this whole fic was one awesome fest EVEN THOUGH I SHOULD BE MAD FOR ALL THIS CRAZY EVELYNN!BASHING GOING. i always died when i saw this was e/b because you don't write that. but you did it so well you should do it more but not in a fluffy way, maybe in a hard gritty manner.

She finds a wrinkle in the mirror one day.

My greatest fear.

fkjsdkfjhsdjkfkja GREATEST LINE IN THIS FIC.

♥

[kaiwynn]

OMG FORGET THE EVELYNN!BASHING, THIS COMMENT IS AWESOME!~

[lastupenda]

LOL MY DIGNITY AND FEELINGS HAVE BEEN HURT I CANNOT IGNORE THAT.

lol my comments are awesome y/y?

[kaiwynn]

lol yesssss

[lostpoisoned]

Holy jesus to the christ.
No words. Just no words.
This is perfect.

[kaiwynn]

♥

[kaiwynn]

thank you bb ♥

[bebitched]

Aaaaaaaand this is the sound of my heart breaking in two.

He loves her enough to settle for her.
Dear god, woman! So true and well put and geez.

Beautiful! I'm just going to cut off my illiterate comment now, lol.

[kaiwynn]

eep! thank you! illiterate comments are the best, haha :D

[bluesuzanne]

This is really beautiful and I've read it like... literally 7 times. I'm still confused.

I feel really stupid :((

[kaiwynn]

don't feel stupid! what do you mean?

[bluesuzanne]

lol, I just don't understand the narrative properly.

So far what I'm getting is:

She leaves Edward (on the wedding day?) goes to Jacob but then... who is she thinking 'I would do it for you' with? Is it still Jacob or is it Edward now? And why are they her not-children? Because she went back to Edward? I'M CONFUSED and highly embarrassed.

[kaiwynn]

ohh, don't worry. it really is a vague writing style, isn't it?

she leaves edward on the wedding day and goes back to jacob. she's thinking "i would do it for you" about edward, because she's just bitten her cheek and tasted blood. and they're her not-children in spirit, but she actually did give birth to them. she just doesn't really love them like she should.

sorry for being so confusing!