she's on a treadmill racing towards the finish line

[kaiwynn]

she's on a treadmill racing towards the finish line
ino/hinata. pg. 1056.
Hinata's eyes track her movements like an assassin, long after she tucks away her knives.

Comments

[spiritualenergy]

ajslkgglks;n This was great. I liked their exchange in the beginning--""You need to hang around me more," Ino says. "Otherwise you'll never get Naruto to look twice at you."" SO INO.

"She doesn't have that gift. Her smiles are half-hearted feeble things that spend most of their lives convincing themselves they exist." I loved this line.

You really make these two work well together. Why must you insist on making me flail??

[kaiwynn]

:DDDD you make ME flail! thank you so much. ino is such a great character, isn't she?

[spiritualenergy]

She is! She's one of my favorite female characters from Naruto, so seeing her get some lovin' makes me very very happy indeed. :)

[kaiwynn]

a;dlgh thank you so much! :D it makes me feel fuzzy that you like my fic ^_^

[redbrunja]

Oh, LOVELY!

I love Ino's so blatant seduction of Hinata, and Hinata's blooming.

Very, very nice.

[kaiwynn]

thank you! this means so much coming from you. ♥

[redbrunja]

*blushes*