Comments | fateful_hour: build me a boat that can carry two

kaiwynn in fateful_hour

build me a boat that can carry two

Aug 19, 2008 11:23

build me a boat that can carry two
susan/bella. pg. 355.
(It must be the eyes. The scarlet almost bleeds into phantom tears and she laughs. So much for self-control.)
narnia/twilight crossover. these things are freakishly addicting, y'all.

( and both shall roam, my love and i )

* twilight, * narnia, * crossover, ? noncanon pairing, & fanfic ;, fic type: drabbles, pairing type: femslash, pairing: bella/susan

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kaiwynn August 19 2008, 22:41:15 UTC

OMG THANK YOU. :]]]]]]

iamshunpike August 19 2008, 22:49:15 UTC

I usually detest crossovers, but this flowed really well. :)

iamshunpike August 19 2008, 22:49:33 UTC

(I also really liked the title)

kaiwynn August 19 2008, 22:50:14 UTC

oh thanks! it's from a folk song, hahaha.

kaiwynn August 19 2008, 22:49:53 UTC

thank you :)

jacyevans August 20 2008, 01:11:49 UTC

OMG, THIS IS GORGEOUS!

Edward fades to a distant dream.

It's easier, she supposes in a rare moment of lucidity, since she never thought he was real anyway.

!!!!!

WHY YOU SO AMAZING, BB?

kaiwynn August 20 2008, 01:14:10 UTC

AAAH THANK YOU!

I DUNNO. I BLAME YOU GUYS. *POINTS TO ENTIRE FLIST*

sensations August 20 2008, 02:09:07 UTC

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omg. omg. omg. omfg. jesus. i loved this.

my favorite part is:

One thing she learns about this place?

When you drink from a talking animal, your eyes refuse to turn back gold.

i'm not sure exactly why but ... wow. i'm like, astonished. just gorgeous.

kaiwynn August 20 2008, 02:14:39 UTC

omg thank you. eee i love your comments, they make me feel all glowy, lol. ♥

sensations August 20 2008, 02:16:21 UTC

i can't even caplock. i am just like, stunned into a calm-ness. inside i am keysmashing but omg, just ... idk. guh. you deserve the glow, doll.

inksplotched August 20 2008, 02:24:34 UTC

MOST WONDERFUL CROSSOVER I'VE EVER READ. HANDS FUCKING DOWN.

kaiwynn August 20 2008, 02:30:37 UTC

OH MY GOD, BB. THANK YOU. THANK YOU SO MUCH.

inksplotched August 20 2008, 02:46:08 UTC

I LOVE IT SO MUCH, I CAN'T EVEN ARTICULATE. I will do that thing where you copy and paste lines you love.

They are both queens in their own right, dark hair pouring down their backs.

Neither of them get what they want, in the end.

IFRNSHPGDF; SUCH A BEAUTIFUL AND POIGNANT BEGINNING.

It's surprisingly easy to enter that world, Bella finds out. So easy, you forget how you've gotten there.

YES. GOD, YES. And that's what makes this crossover perfect, the fact that Narnia is discoverable from another world and therefore an opening exists for characters from other universes to interact with Narnia characters. Hsagksdha.

One thing she learns about this place?

When you drink from a talking animal, your eyes refuse to turn back gold.

SMNKIHNWIG. There is so much depth to this line.

Also, the whole thing about finding out why they're in Narnia, and the conclusion... so perfect. I love this.

kaiwynn August 20 2008, 02:48:56 UTC

ahhhhhh long comment is amazing. like you don't even KNOW how glad i am that you like this. i am so happy <3333333