Comments | fateful_hour: if we were words on a page

kaiwynn in fateful_hour

if we were words on a page

Aug 22, 2008 09:31

if we were words on a page
kyouya/tamaki. pg. 393.
Seven waterlogged words disintegrate before they ever reach the bottom.
for lazynin at the fandomsecrets panfandom request meme. :D

( cut me up in little threads )

pairing type: slash, fic type: drabbles, pairing: kyouya/tamaki, * ouran, & fanfic ;

Comments 14

lazynin August 23 2008, 01:57:35 UTC

AAAA that is so fabuloussssss. *__* I love it.

kaiwynn August 23 2008, 01:58:29 UTC

yaaaay! i'm glad you like it :D

wildejoy August 23 2008, 02:46:08 UTC

This is really good. There are so many superficial fics, especially for Kyouya/Tamaki (and I'm guilty of following in those footsteps, honestly) - but this story proved both insightful and romantic, which seems quite rare in this fandom.

I really, really love the bit about charging Tamaki for breaking his heart - that may as well be canon Kyouya.

You should be very proud of this.

kaiwynn August 23 2008, 02:58:55 UTC

oh, thank you! your comment makes me proud. ♥

scratchmist August 23 2008, 03:33:48 UTC

Oh, I loved that. Almost read like poetry. It was beautiful and heartbreaking - nicely done. <3

kaiwynn August 23 2008, 03:34:20 UTC

thanks so much!~

seitic August 23 2008, 07:39:59 UTC

Dude. kai :[ why are you so good at this. :[ :[ :[ :[

loved it. ♥

kaiwynn August 23 2008, 15:26:52 UTC

frownyface. i dunno.

thank youu ♥

sagetan August 24 2008, 01:31:44 UTC

Oh wow. I feel for Kyouya. I agree with the other reviewer, this reads like verse. Love these lines,

Seven waterlogged words disintegrate before they ever reach the bottom.

He pushes his glasses farther up the bridge of his nose as he considers whether to charge Tamaki for breaking his heart.

kaiwynn August 24 2008, 01:35:54 UTC

oh thank you! i'm so afraid my style kind of throws people off, but thanks for reassuring me <3