A story

[fatuuspueri]

I am evaluating my writing ability, I need you guys to rate this, please. Not that you ever do when I ask, but please consider this time to actually do what I ask. I want you to evaluate based on one thing solely for now, and when I make future attempts, I will ask other things. This one is for putting you in the place and time I am writing about,

Comments

[lonely_racoon]

Kinda makes you feel there. Not for me, since I have no sex drive and would not be in bed with a woman randomly. But othe rthan that, awesome description. The Forest part is definitely the most realistic...but maybe because I can relate to that section more than I can with the girl in bed. :shrugs: Not sure why, btu I like the forest part.

[tangerinesunset]

wow, awesome story brent. it makes me happy and sad at the same time. you are definetly talented.

by the way this is amanda from drama class, and im adding you to my friends list =)