Title: Forever Bound.
Arc: I don't really know. Where ever it fits ^^.
Place: The sins' home.
Summary: sloth's first appearance i think.
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Ooooh! I like! Nice comparison that Sloth and Wrath in this world work together like the anime ones did, but by force rather than design. I like how you emphasized how Wrath is no longer kind or gentle, but actually cruel and violent. And it was interesting to see a bit of how Sloth's going to work.
I did notice a bunch of grammar mistakes. I'll post them in the actual story post, rather than the community post.
Not bad for your first fic, though. Not bad at all. :)
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........i guess it does xDDD;
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I did notice a bunch of grammar mistakes. I'll post them in the actual story post, rather than the community post.
Not bad for your first fic, though. Not bad at all. :)
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