Fanfic: The Seduction of Jimmy Wilson

[fauxpocky]

Title: The Seduction of Jimmy Wilson
Pairing: House/Wilson
Rating: Let's call it NC-17, better to be safe than sorry.
Word Count: 6315
Spoilers: Not really. Vague references to Love Hurts, that's about it.
Author's Notes: Don't look at me, I just write it. THEY did this. Okay, so I poked them for some smut, but this wasn't quite what I originally

Comments

[fauxpocky]

How could I not comment on the gun!kink hotness? :D

So perfect of House to think he's got the low down and in fact being a bit behind the times.

He's too confident for his own good, he needs to "lose" now and then, and I thought he wouldn't mind losing this one *eg*

And I love how he thinks he has to experiment on Wilson :D

*stares* You may just have given me a plotbunny...we'll see *goes to make notes on the theme of experimentation*

[silsbee329]

Wilson's opinion on the right tie to go with the blue shirt had been suspicious on its own, put it together with the fact that Chase agreed, and it was far more damning.

Bwah! I'm home sick today, and this really cheered me up! It's funny and hot and pretty much perfect! Love it! ;)

[fauxpocky]

I'm home sick today, and this really cheered me up!

Thank you! Considering that this piece tormented me while I was sick, I'm glad it did SOMETHING good for a sick person! :D

very nice fic

[missviolet]

This was by far the best House slash fic I have ever read. You really captured them both. I love the sexiness of it, the slow buildup, and the sweet, hot sex scene. I love how you did not use the biological details that amateur slash writers tend to throw in, nor any ridiculous verbs like "keen" or "mewl." I think half the slash out there is written by people who have never had sex. It is clear that you have experienced sex and love and this flavors your writing with a depth that is often lacking in fan fiction. It is a rare piece and extremely well-done. Now, would you please write some more? Pretty please?

Re: very nice fic

[fauxpocky]

*blushes furiously* That's one of the nicest things anyone's ever said about my writing. Thank you so much!

I'm prone to over-writing smut, so I've been working on simplifying it, and letting a lack of detail provoke the imagination without needing to spell out every single step in the process. But I have a deep loathing of bad euphamisms and "Mills and Boon"-esque language in sex scenes, so the ridiculous verbs were always out of the question :D

I'm attempting to write more, but my muse has always and will always be temperamental. But I'm detemined to get a few more pieces out of my recent return to writing, before it all vanishes again, so I'll see if I can be firm on the topic.

[fredegond]

This is great. Poor chase anmd foreman,hehe! and cameron trying to catch them, so shocking, so true! love house thinking he's so manipulative and then realising wilson already knows. wonderful.

[fauxpocky]

It's so easy to startle Chase and Foreman with this sort of thing, though *g* And I do dearly love the idea of Cameron wanting to watch. Cause she would *G*

Thanks for commenting! *bg*

[baka_sensei]

I loved this. Everyone was super in character, it was amusing as hell, and... geh. I can't articulate how awesome this was. Seriously. I love you. And I love your mad writing skillz. :-D

[fauxpocky]

*blushes a lot* Thank you!

It's really strange getting all these replies cause I see my own writing from a fairly negatively biased point of view. I'm spending a lot of time grinning like a lunatic and blushing. But it's lovely! So thank you for contributing to making me grin and blush *G*

Also, your icon? Too good :D

[baka_sensei]

Awww, I feel the same way about my writing. I guess it's just a thing, that people can't look at their own writing from an objective point of view and see how awesome (or in some cases, sucky)It really is. I think good writers think their work sucks, and bad writers think their work is amazing. So yeah, that makes you a goooooood writer.

Seriously, this is totally added to memories. Which I don't do often. So yay for you! ^_^

Thanks for the icon!love. I made it myself in shitty MSPaint. Just like I made this one. I have next to no computer skillz, so glad that the marginal skillz I do have can create things that amuse... :-D