Fanfic: A Night Like Any Other

[fauxpocky]

Title: A Night Like Any Other
Pairing: House/Wilson
Rating: G
Word Count: 882
Author's Notes: Another experimental sort of piece. Second person narrative and a little strange.
Summary: It's a night like any other, except it's not. Sometimes a question isn't clearly a question until it gets an answer.

Comments

[fauxpocky]

I'm not a fan of second person either, normally, it's too Choose-Your-Own-Adventure, but that's just how this turned up. I contemplated changing it to third, but it so neatly sidestepped the pronoun issue I decided to leave it *g*

House does diagnosis!face, and when he aims it at a person I think it must make them feel like a specimen under a microscope *g*

Thank you :D

[silsbee329]

Perfect! I love stories where they recognize what's going on between them. The use of second person works very nicely here.

like he's having another of his lightning leaps of logic
Love this!

:)

[fauxpocky]

A little alliteration always works well...

Glad you liked :D

[fauxpocky]

*blush* Thank you. I feel something of an affinity for the Wilson persona, so it's nice to hear my take on his thought processes seems plausible :D

[stilmoch]

You've captured that look and Wilson's thoughts perfectly. I'd be afraid of "the look," because I don't think I'd be ready for what House would be about to reveal to me about myself.

Nice work.

[fauxpocky]

House is far too analytical for everyone else's good, and not at all shy about sharing his ideas with other people *g* I'd be scared to meet him because he'd pick up on things I didn't want anyone to know, and possibly things I didn't even know about *g*

Thank you :)

[lalablue]

not many people can actually do second person narative well. You did very good. I liked this very much.

[fauxpocky]

Thank you *G* The House/Wilson fandom has offered me a lot of challenges, and trying second person was another of them. I don't know that I've ever written anything like this, I'm glad you like it :D