Comments | fauxpocky: Fanfic: Three Drabbles

fauxpocky

Fanfic: Three Drabbles

Aug 13, 2006 12:34

Title: Three Drabbles ( Read more... )

Comments 8

sydneylover150 August 13 2006, 03:30:08 UTC

*laughs* I love this. Honestly this is an awesome look into all three characters' thoughts. Excellent. Thank you for making my day!!

fauxpocky August 15 2006, 11:02:11 UTC

And thank YOU for giving me my first feedback on my newly discovered Housefic and encouraging me to go write more :D

anonymous August 13 2006, 03:41:29 UTC

Good choice to continue with the other two POVs -- the first one alone isn't as satisfying as the three together, and the ending of the third one refers back to the first two, so it's stronger. I like your parallel structure, too. Really nice work.

bwc_baby August 13 2006, 04:58:31 UTC

these are good! I hope you write more..I've never got the guts to post anything of mine here..I just lurk and commet

fauxpocky August 15 2006, 11:03:52 UTC

Thank you!

I just lurk and commet

Not any more, I see ;D

daisylily August 13 2006, 18:25:30 UTC

Have a lollyicon.

It only comes out when something makes me very happy, as these drabbles have. They would work well as individual drabbles, but together they make a very satisfying whole.

Write more!

fauxpocky August 15 2006, 11:05:42 UTC

Yay lollyicon! *censors associated dirty thoughts about lollipops*

I don't think I'm good enough to get enough into just the one drabble, but I'm glad you liked the three together :)

boiledpotato August 20 2006, 11:07:02 UTC

I really liked this... Especially the Cuddy one. House haveing the urge to taint Wilson is the best kind of interpretation and I love to see it here. More!