Glass Cliff CW: off screen violence

[favoritebean]

The women huddled together in the cellar that warm afternoon in May. Everyone, save for Mama Edney, made it safely to the cellar. Edney stayed back to close up the chicken coops. As Margaret made her way to the cellar, children in tow, she could hear her mother in law shooing the hens, chicks and rooster into their house

Comments

[roina_arwen]

This is fascinating!
Minor issue here near the end: Siseley stood, nearly hitting her ceiling on the support beam of the cellar.
-I’m pretty sure you meant “nearly hitting her head” and it got messed up in editing. I know I do this sometimes too. ❤️

Thanks for the heads up!

[favoritebean]

Phooey. Are we allowed to edit before the poll goes up?

I also forgot to list the author of the song in my notes.

Re: Thanks for the heads up!

[roina_arwen]

Yes, you can edit at any time before the poll goes up. You’re welcome!

Re: Thanks for the heads up!

[favoritebean]

Thank you!

[adoptedwriter]

Wow! Very engaging! I liked this.

[karmasoup]

I’m always fascinated by folks who know so much about their family history. This is a very realistic feeling and riveting moment of a world gone by.

[lyssa027]

Very interesting ;) I enjoyed this

[banana_galaxy]

This sounds like it would've been a pretty scary experience.