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[fayded_mind]

Ok, so this is totally cheating, and I don't expect anyone to give me credit now for stuff I did a long time ago, but some of these tales have not been seen in present company and, I think, are read-worthy. While looking through the hard-drive for a particular story for a friend, I found lots of little treasures. If I broke the big things into

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Here's a thought

[fayded_mind]

I would like to throw out a suggestion, and you can throw it out too if you don't like it: I think the characters I have introduced have a hint more life and detail than the story requires, and it seems to me that those characters may have more to do. I would love to see short stories involving one or more of the characters used here--not necessarily erotic, just stories of other aspects of their lives. For example, we have a politician or sorts, a fashion designer, a wannabe musician that has fed on vampire blood for a while (for those of us who have played, he's a ghoul). I'd like to know more about the separate lives of our vampires, or they way they met, or Juliet's embrace, or Dianine's embrace, or what happens to Edwin, or what happened to Edwin before if you want to leave out the whole vampire thing. Heck, a great story about some of the other guys at the guitar store, with a walk-on for Dan or Ed would be great. Let's put together a collection of stories containing common characters, and we can arrange them

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[penntastic]

before I read your comment I was going to ask if they are vampires. I think you could have expanded on Ed's torture week. The characters were defined just enough to keep them mysterious, but not be so vague that I didn't care. The opening dialog is death. You could re-write ed's into as a normal guy if you wanted to, but really i think it can start with the handcuffs bit. Your idea about stories overlapping characters is very Kevin Smith (with a pinch of Quentin Tarintino). I support it.

Re: notes

[fayded_mind]

Yup. The main reason for the suggestion was the dialog in the beginning. It felt to me like that part belonged in another story. That's what's wrong with not being able to outline. My rhythm was off, and the lead-in, should really have been cut. Still, it's there and now it can be a part of something more. Write away, my dear. I'd love to see what tales we can collect

Game on! Clothes off! Fangs out!

[jacob_fargon]

OK, I'll give it a whirl...why? Because I am a sick little flying monkey. I have a surprise for you.

Now, I can sense that you are just sqwirming in your seat in anticipation, and soon I will stop typing so you can get back to your husband, but I will have to take a while to do this: you know, dealing in shit takes time (at least you use diapers).

OK, glove picked up....get back to yo' man....

Huggles

J