Devil's Playground- chapter 10

[fayding_fast]

Title: Devil's Playground
Author: Fayding_fast
Chapter: 10/12
Disclaimer: Don't own 'em
Rating: R
Pairing: House/Wilson (pre-slash)
Spoilers: Yes, for Wilson's Heart
Con-crit? Yes please and thank you kindly.
Summary: House meets a strange man who promises House that he can help him to get his friendship with Wilson back on track.

Comments

[debbiel66]

Somehow I missed this update!

I love the way you do troubled, fragile Wilson... you don't make him pathetic or weak in any way, but you "up" the protective instincts in everyone else in a way that drives the story. "Camel's Back and its follow-ups are absolute favorites for this reason.

I can't wait to find out what happens next. I'm going to take great pleasure in re-reading this, beginning to end, once it's done. You're doing such a good job with it.

[fayding_fast]

you don't make him pathetic or weak in any way

Although I'm happy to show Wilson crying in a story (or two!), neither he nor House are blubberers. I hate to read a fic where one or other of them is sobbing all the way through it. It's completely out of character.

You're doing such a good job with it

Thank you. As always, your praise means a great deal :)

[katie310117]

*writhes around in miserable ecstasy*
I hate you and I love you and I can't wait for an update. Also love the irony of naming the devil Michael.

[fayding_fast]

writhes around in miserable ecstasy

*wags finger* You should never read when you're tired :)

Also love the irony of naming the devil Michael

Cool, isn't it? You're the first one to mention it.

I'm delighted that you are enjoying the fic and that you love me. Not so sure about the "hate" bit, though :D

Thanks for leaving another comment. Take care.

[jadzia7667]

The angst, it ratchets tighter and tighter. It's a good fit. I like that, however fragile Wilson is, he's still essentially himself. Or at least, the himself that I recognize.

[fayding_fast]

Thank you. I try very hard to keep both guys in character, but I know everyone sees them differently. Glad you can still recognize Wilson.