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Fic- Whatever it takes 23

Jan 02, 2012 00:10

Title: Whatever it takes 23
Author- faythbrady
Show/Ship: Heroes, Sylar/Claire
Disclaimer: I own a cool Sylar poster and a cheerleader outfit but that's about it.
Rating: T
Summary: A morning visit from Angela followed by an afternoon helping Noah, this day was just getting better and better.
A/N: Here is where i'd usually apologize for not having ( Read more... )

fanfic, fic, heroes, sylar/claire

Comments 9

spaceanjl January 2 2012, 00:26:09 UTC

She broke Sylar. No fair. :)

Good to have you back. I like the Jesse Custer voice trick.

(Also, I kinda wanted someone to use a 'ready for my close-up, Mr De Mille.' Is that wrong?)

ccmom January 2 2012, 02:13:24 UTC

I second Claire's request!!!! Please oh please!

Awesome chapter! I'm thrilled that you updated! This needs more exclaimation marks!!!! Thrilled!!!!!!!!

Loved the tension between Sylar and Noah. Loved the smackdown that Sylar got from the boy. (he needed to be brought down a peg or two.) But really, my favorite part was the naked comment. Cause, really? Who wouldn't want to see that man naked? *dreamy sigh*

Looking forward to the next one. *cheerleader attempt*

anonymous January 4 2012, 09:35:21 UTC

Hey, good to see your back with an update! Had to read the last chapter again to get up to speed but everything came back then. Still have your gift for humor I see. I laughed when Noah threw the name of the man Sylar murdered in his face and Sylar kept drawing a blank. Classic! And what an epic battle between DeMille and Sylar! Very well thought out. And I never dreamed that Luke would show up to save Sylar's butt! And he FINALLY thought up a way to use his powers in more constructive ways. Good for him. I seem to remember a while ago mentioning to you that it would help if Luke could use his power for killing cancer or something useful and you thanking me for giving you an idea. So this turned out to be it. Pretty neat way to tie everything up. And I loved the image of Luke just distracting DeMille and then hitting him with a piece of wood. Sylar is going to have to realize that it's much harder to win battles when your good than it is when your bad. And a nice touch writing that bit where Angela saw Luke murdering someone ( ... )

means2bhuman January 10 2012, 06:21:59 UTC

I'll come back and comment on a new chapter later, I promise.
But I wanna know how you're doing, if I may ask? :)

faythbrady January 10 2012, 22:54:10 UTC

I'm doing much better than I was. They have managed to alter my medication so that I can function as a human being again which is nice. My brother is no longer in and out of hospital which is better and I get to keep my job- albeit in a different location and with different people, but I will be getting money to pay rent which is great. Still have the odd bad day but I'm slowly crawling back to normalcy. Thanks for asking pet.

means2bhuman January 11 2012, 00:47:37 UTC

I'm so glad to hear about your brother! And your medications - I have some experience with not being human because of them. No creativity. The rest is awesome to hear! Welcome back!

cazcatharsis February 12 2012, 07:49:08 UTC

I gotta try that someday. forthright, honest, and definately a jaw dropper. bwahaha. "naked" indeed. HAH!

Love that Luke found a funky new way to view his own powers. It's not a tool for slaughter only, it's a good way to get free cable. Now he's not mentally condemned to be a murderer, things are more opened up!

Lovely, as usual. This is by far my favorite sylar/claire fic and I do hope you keep at it.