fic -- lonely nights ahead

[whatevernvm]

“We already talked about this, Erica,” Olivia replied, letting out a sigh and taking off her coat. The two of them had been drinking for most of the night, but when Erica witnessed Olivia being a little too friendly with the bartender, her mood quickly shifted and all she wanted to do in the end was go home.

“No, we haven’t, Olivia. And that

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Lonely Nights Ahead

[fanficfab]

That was great, I really like that you gave these two some depth. It seems like the idea of the pairing is too new for much more than-'falling in love or the first time', so Thank You Very much, I really enjoyed this!!!

Re: Lonely Nights Ahead

[whatevernvm]

Thank you so much, it means a lot! I thought that I would skip all the "we met, we want to bone" deal and went straight to the angst, haha. And you're welcome. :3

[whatevernvm]

Thank you, thank you! I have a feeling that this will not be the last of their angst. |: I like angst. xD

[morthel]

I like the pairing, but perhaps you should fix the spelling mistakes. They're hilarious, but nonetheless.

"her body only clothed by the pants she had been wearing that day and a black braw"

"Olivia had come out of the bathroom wearing her bathroom"

That's one very portable bathroom right there. :DDD

[whatevernvm]

Hahahaha, omg, I'm such an idiot. Sorry, man. I don't like to proof read, so that explains a lot. But thanks for pointing those out. ;_________;