Comments | fcuk_it16: Hello, I Need You, Like A Bullet To The Brain - Jo/Pete

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Hello, I Need You, Like A Bullet To The Brain - Jo/Pete - R

Oct 26, 2008 23:49

Title: Hello, I Need You, Like A Bullet To My Brain
Rating: R, language and brief het-sex
Pairing: Joe/Pete, Pete/Ashlee, brief Joe/Jon - always-a-girl verse
Disclaimer: I do not own anything, this is a work of fiction. If you googled yourself or someone you know... turn around now.
Summary: Snapshots and movie reels from the relationship of Jo ( Read more... )

pete/ashlee, joe/pete, girlverse, joe/jon, r rating

Comments 4

slash_scion November 25 2008, 15:50:41 UTC

Oh wow! This is really well written. It's also the first alwaysagirl!Joe fic I've ever read. I actually teared up a bit when Jo found the engagement ring.

Is it sad that I kind of wanted Patrick and Jo to hook up?

I loved this!!

Gah! I Deleted My Comment! fcuk_it16 December 2 2008, 06:04:31 UTC

Thank you so much, this is actually one of my favourite things that I have ever written but I don't think a lot of people have seen it. I had originally thought of have Jo and Patrick hook up but then I decided that what she really needed in him was a friend, and then if I did end up with them I would need to delve into that relationship and I wouldn't be able to end it where I wanted it to.

I am so sorry that I have taken so long to get back to you, my internet was dead for a few days and then livejournal has been dicking with me and not telling me when I get comments. But I have gotten all of you comments and I really really appreciate all of them and have read every single one. I am going to reply to some of them but please know that I have read and appreciated every single one of them.

jordanzgrl17 December 13 2008, 03:53:09 UTC

Oh my god, you made me cry! Tears of happiness and for Pete being a jerk.

Jo and Patrick would be cute as a couple, but I do like them better as friends. I wish I had a good guy friend that would watch movies, play games, and basically hang around with, that wasn't someone I was dating.

Great story, do you have any more?

fcuk_it16 December 13 2008, 06:19:43 UTC

As much as it sucks that you cried, it makes me feel all fuzzy that it affected you... I always feel kind of insensitive saying that...

I really, really though about making them a couple but their relationship reminded me a lot of the relationships that I had with the guys I lived with. As far as they were concerned I was just this weird dude with tits and when I started to write this thats what I had in mind for Patrick and I am really glad that I stuck with it.

I have another girl!joe one that is paired with Pete but I think you found it :)

Thank you for commenting, it makes me happy to see that someone is reading this one since I don't think that it got out to a lot of people and I am fairly proud of it.