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slate_and_lead June 20 2009, 06:02:02 UTC
Oh my heart!

I loved this. So beautiful. Memmed.

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fcuk_it16 June 21 2009, 01:21:30 UTC
Thank you my dear! <3

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mayqueen517 June 20 2009, 06:37:24 UTC
I pretty much knew when Jon met Brendon and the mention of the headaches that Jon was going to have to help him. And that broke my heart. Oh god, Jon's...reluctance at first is so sweet, and then as it changes to where he genuinely ENJOYS helping, is gorgeous.

I was curious as to when does it stop, I mean, does it keep going...or what?

This was beautiful, though, and I loved Tom in it so so so much.

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fcuk_it16 June 21 2009, 01:26:27 UTC
Thank you very much :)
I kind of had it in my mind that t all just kept going until Jon wasn't able to do it anymore, I mean, it's a very personal thing for that character to as long as there was some ability in them to help they would keep gettin ghte pictures... I don't know if that made sense.
Tom was a lot of fun to writing and looking back I wish I would a have put a little bit more of him in.

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sweetrevenge418 June 20 2009, 06:53:23 UTC
Oh my throat is all scratchy and my eyes are watering and this is why I normally don't read stories where people die! *sad*
But this was absolutely gorgeous, and I'm glad I read it, despite the sad.
(Also, there was mention of hockey, and hockey + death = Untamed Heart in my head, so now I'm thinking of that too and am a total wreck...)

Is it possible to have heart eyes and sad face at the same time? Let's see...
♥,_,♥

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fcuk_it16 June 21 2009, 01:32:11 UTC
I'm glad that you're happy you read it, even if you nromally wouldn't :) and I am really happy that you liked it.
I haven't heard of Untamed Heart before, I might have to look into it.
I think you succeeded with the hearts in the eyes and sad face at the same time. Although if you look closely it's almost like the hearts are pom poms, or ears maybe.

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sweetrevenge418 June 21 2009, 03:26:30 UTC
Untamed Heart is a great, but sad, movie. Here's the description: http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0108451/
After watching it, you'll know why the hockey just set me bawling.
And I quite think it looks like a winking panda, myself : )

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thimbledkisses June 20 2009, 16:09:27 UTC
I loved reading this! Although, I have to admit, I chose your fic because it reminds me a lot of this amazing book Elsewhere. And hello, Jon/Bden - how could I possibly resist that

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fcuk_it16 June 21 2009, 01:40:15 UTC
Thank you very much!
I haven't heard of the book before... hopefully it wasn't too similar. Who is it by? I wouldn't mind taking a look at it *g*
Jon/Bden is definately a weak spot <3 I almost wrote it as Spencer/Jon but then I changed it towards the last minute of plotting out my outline.

I am really happy that you chose my fic! <3

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sohardtosmile June 21 2009, 00:05:21 UTC
i loved this. not much reduces me to tears but i was in floods by the end of it. you could feel what was coming next however much you didn't want jon to lose brendon. gorgeous ♥

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fcuk_it16 June 21 2009, 01:49:43 UTC
I'm glad that you liked it.
I never really know how to say this without sounding bad but it means a lot to me that it managed to invoke enough emotion in you tht you found your self tearing up... I really don't mean that as it sounds, I just don't know how to explain it another way.
Thank you.

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