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[feagwath]

Congeal in my lungs
For in the time it takes to cough you up,
I'll have been dead for two months,
And scoured will be the world
Of meaning as goes a numb hand
Convulsing over chill glass before dawn.

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[deadinterest]

This is great usage of descriptive(s). Cutting down to the pure agony of loss. Sounds like you lost someone important to you...