[ENG] .Grey:04 - Darkness

[eleawin]

DARKNESS

The absence of light; blackness; obscurity; gloom.

(one)

He felt like he

Comments

[shinchul303]

This is so consistently GOOD. I'm actually nervous about the next chapter--there's already been so much emotional havoc.

This is the first DBSK fic I've seen where the members are so realistically at each others throats. Really volatile.

[eleawin]

i'm afraid there more drama to go... next chapter will show a harsh side of the entertainment business~
thanks for reading and commenting ^^

[faricsyung]

I just simply love this that I couldn't comment much. ._. The realism is <33. Even when it's harsh.. Life is bitter most of the time anyway.

I also like how you put in TxT. Since Avex managed THSK - feel free to correct me - I've been wondering if they ever exchanged greetings. ;D

Thanks for the update. Looking forward to the next chapter. <3

[eleawin]

You're right, T&T are the only JE group working under a non-JE label, Avex in T&T's case. I don't know if they ever met but it would be so interesting to see them interacting XD

I'm glad you like the realistic yet harsh side of this story. Thanks for reading! :)

[whomperjawed]

You French people know how to write! And also know how to pick the most awesomest English beta readers XD; kekeke Your icon is most lurve, meh dear :3

I've commented before, but I must say that THIS is my fav chapter so far [not only cuz of the YooSu] but because everything seems to be heating up now and things are beginning to fall into place. Junsu is at near his breaking point!

[eleawin]

i'm always picking the best among the best XDDDD <33 your icon is love as well, kamo-butt is so much win *_*

your favorite chapter? i'm glad to hear that! it's my personal favorite as well ._. I think you'll be surprised by the next chapter~

[whomperjawed]

I get first dibs!! \*o*/

[eleawin]

of course <3
it may not be a gift since it will probably be full of tense mistakes XD

[junsu_sarang]

yes, the characters of the members are so realistic, i love that lil' scene of yoosu in the bedroom, it wasnt rushed but rather developed in a slow sweet way, cutee^^

i like it a lot, plz update soon^^ no pressure though x]

[eleawin]

thank you ^^
I'm glad you enjoyed the yoosu, even if it turned kind of wrong after the bedroom scene ;)

[junsu_sarang]

eh, kinda a too late reply ^^;; but i justed added u as friend, hope u accept, so thats way i'll know sooner if u update :D thanx in advance^^

[eleawin]

to be updated with the latest chapter, you need to add this comm' (here the link: http://www.livejournal.com/community/join.bml?comm=feather_n_snow), not my personal journal ^^' i don't post my fics there!
^^

[butterflyweb]

*loves*

I was just wishing for a chapter last night and here it is! I will admit to perusing your fic journal and finding it in french and trying to translate in babelfish cause i'm just that impatient. It failed massively and it's so much better to read it this way. :)

Yoochun is an ass. *growls* And selfish. And while Yunho is being the consistent douche here, I'm mad at him cause christ, chunnie, like su doesn't have enough to deal with without you playing with his feelings right now. And poor Su. He's just going to crack soon.

I'm rooting quite emphatically for MinSu (*points to icon*) because Min is taking care of Su in his own, quiet way, and obviously cares for him a lot. And once again, Chunnie's being a selfish butthead.

This was a really great chapter. You can just feel Su's helplessness and exhaustion and I just really want someone to hug him.

More soon, plzkthnx.

[eleawin]

the english version is not exactly the same as the french one. I changed the name of some characters: Young Hee is Soo Lee in the french version. Knowing that may help you to understand the babelfish translation >D (or maybe not: babelfish obviously hates the french slang i like using in my writings :D