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[ENG] .Grey:04 - Darkness

Feb 28, 2008 12:24

DARKNESS

The absence of light; blackness; obscurity; gloom.

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He felt like he ( Read more... )

Comments 34

bvalkon February 29 2008, 04:53:18 UTC

they're all so stressed out and they're being streched so thin that they barely have time to breathe.. Junsu especially needs the others support right now and needs to talk w/ Yunho at some point, as well as w/ Yoochun. >_>

great job, keep up the good work!!

eleawin February 29 2008, 17:08:14 UTC

i remember seeing a video where yoochun said that junsu's problem was that he never spoke about his difficulties (starwatch? or couple takk, maybe)

thx for reading and commenting ^^

ara_niey February 29 2008, 05:08:49 UTC

ahh~is it just me or things have really become more intense than before?

poor junsu..with chunnie doing that like it was no big deal..yunnie keep pushing him..jae..aish~thank god finally he realized how ridiculous he had acted..and min..thank god min's the only one not bringing him headache like the rest..

thanks for updating!!~^_^

eleawin February 29 2008, 17:14:12 UTC

things are moving fast x)

it's not really easy for jae... he's supposed to be the lead vocal but sometimes the pressure is just too strong. junsu is under the spotlight, and jae can't help it but be a little jealous

thx for reading and commenting ^^

anazianblonde February 29 2008, 05:46:04 UTC

omg! so much emotions can be felt when reading this! so sad, poor junsu!

eleawin February 29 2008, 17:14:47 UTC

i'm glad you enjoyed it :)

chicmez February 29 2008, 10:34:55 UTC

sigh... poor JunSu... and the rest of DBSK as well... they're so exhausted and that is making them go at each other's throats... sigh...

*sniff sniff* I just want to go and hug JunSu. poor thing... its just one thing after another coming at him... bad things... hope JunHo is ok

eleawin February 29 2008, 17:19:44 UTC

it's not possible to have the same people around all the time and never argue with them :D but they make up quickly. well, at least in jae and changmin's case.

junsu needed a big hug indeed D:

kizha February 29 2008, 11:56:30 UTC

I have to say I love this. The way the characters and relationship are painted struck me as very apt and the dialogue is amazing with a sense of humour that is witty without being invasive, everything just fits together very well with brilliant chracterisation and all.

The langauge is pretty good too, taking into account the fact that this is a translation, I thought most of the words used were pretty well placed. Just one thing though, can I access the original version anywhere? I'll love to see it in french for myself...

Anyway, go on translating, I look forward to the next chapter... since the beauty of plot and language would be lost on me when I finish reading the chapter in french. Thanks, nice work.

kizha February 29 2008, 12:00:34 UTC

oops. I didn't see the link before this, but found the french version, shall read it as soon as I have time.

eleawin February 29 2008, 17:27:30 UTC

i think you found it already, but just use this tag if you want to find them all:

http://community.livejournal.com/feather_n_snow/tag/grey

eleawin February 29 2008, 17:20:47 UTC

i'm glad you like this story :)