[DBSK] ENG - MinSu - And in the end...

[eleawin]

Title: And in the end...
Pairing: MinSu
Genre: Angst
A/N: English version of Et à la fin... Cross-posted on min_su { here}

Comments

[ree_of_ree]

I love this. Honestly, I loved all the words and the following scenarios.

////Changmin almost fell in the stairs when he bursts out of his room.

“Who’s the asshole who downloaded gay porn on my computer?!”//// XD.

[ree_of_ree]

AND i WAS first yay !!!

[eleawin]

Congrats XD
Glad you enjoyed it!

[neophnx]

luv it.....

[eleawin]

thanks for reading :)

[ana_zid]

Hey.. the english was not so bad... so chill.. <3

[eleawin]

thank you ^^

[x_voracity]

The english wasn't that bad at all :]
Ohh I like them all; it was quite the sad story :'(
I especially liked peace, saint, denial, & community.

[eleawin]

Glad you like it :)
Thanks for reading!

short beta

[whomperjawed]

Under Step, instead of "Changmin almost fell in the stairs when he bursts out of his room.", did you mean "Changmin almost fell down the stairs when he burst out of his room." ?

Under Ritual, instead of "Yoochun had a morning routine...", did you mean "Yoochun has a morning routine..."? Because of the tense change.

Under Statement, instead of "Yoochun does as if he didn’t hear him.", did you mean "Yoochun pretends as if he didn't hear him." ?

Under Faith, it should be "sinned", not "sin"

Re: short beta

[whomperjawed]

And PS--

I really enjoyed this fic. <33333

Re: short beta

[eleawin]

thanks :)