Fic: The Stars Blindly Run - Chapter 1

[featheredraven]

Title: The Stars Blindly Run
Chapter: One
Characters/Pairings: Anders, Justice, F!Hawke, Carver, Isabela, Varric with eventual Hawke/Anders
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 5352
Summary: He does not think that he will ever return to the Deep Roads, but, then, there are lot of things that he doesn't think he'll ever do again.
A/N: Spoilers up through the end of

Comments

[blue_scarab]

Loved this - the banter, for sure, the little nudges and curiosity from Justice, and most especially your Anders.

[featheredraven]

The banter was a lot of fun to write, but I kept worrying that people weren't sounding in character.

I'm glad you like how I write Anders! It was interesting trying to figure out a way to write him, especially since it ties in so closely with Justice.

[miri1984]

This is fabulous! Will be following!!

[featheredraven]

Glad you enjoyed it! Hopefully, there will be more of it soon!

[rose_in_shadow]

This is really good. Loved the banter and the Justice talk. Looking forward to more!

[featheredraven]

I had fun writing early on Anders/Justice interactions. It's such an odd dynamic, but definitely fun to write. And glad you liked this!

[thirteenthchime]

I really loved the Anders/Justice bits - that old DA:O Anders was sort of shining through, though with far more restraint. Can't wait for more!

[featheredraven]

That's part of what I was trying to do, so I'm glad that's what it felt like! While I could see the connection between DA2 Anders and Awakening Anders, I feel like they could have had him be a little more like he was in Awakening at the beginning of the game.

[solan_t]

I really like this, this rather delicate exploration of both the Justice/Anders story and even the Anders/Hawke story. I look forward to more.

[arysani]

You know, this refreshing. A look at Anders/Justice before Doom and Gloom descend. I like the idea of getting to know him at this point - when he still distinguishes between himself and Justice in a very clear way, and still has echoes of the Anders we knew and loved before the merging, albeit tinted with caution.

And Carver. I don't know that I had Anders along a lot in the beginning of my mage PT...it's interesting to see their interactions (as I do dearly love Carver...)

[featheredraven]

I'm a fan of Carver and definitely wanted to write something with him. I wasn't completely certain about the whole part where he and Anders talk in this, but I think I'm happy with it.