Fic: Better with Coffee

May 25, 2011 17:02

Title: Better with Coffee
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: f!Hawke/Anders
Summary: Not leaving first thing in the morning lead Anders to discover that Hawke has one of his favorite things ever: coffee
A/N: A sequel to Butterfly Mornings and rather inspired by Coffee and Manifestos. So, basically, more morning-time fluff, because there needs to be so ( Read more... )

character: hawke, dragon age, character: anders, fanfiction

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rose_in_shadow May 26 2011, 00:37:51 UTC
This is completely adorable. I love the little note about where coffee comes from and how it's not readily available. So many fics decide to gloss over worldbuilding lore like that, but I think just a little note to address it adds a great deal more immersion into the world. All that to say, I liked it. lol

Now I want a cup of coffee. At 8:30 at night. lol

Two minor proofreading notes (I'm an editor, I can't help myself):

+ "maybe he should be so surprised" - should be "shouldn't" here perhaps?

+" he is technically living their now" - should be "there"

<3

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featheredraven May 26 2011, 00:53:44 UTC
I like writing bits of worldbuilding in fic, particularly if it's something that isn't mentioned in canon at all. Glad that you like it!

I desperately wanted coffee while writing this. :D

...and that is what happens when I write things in my downtime at work. Off to fix those two errors! Thanks for pointing them out! <3

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nithrithil May 26 2011, 00:50:52 UTC
(I approve of more Anders fluff and of him being ridiculous XD)

That was adorable, and I was grinning the whole time as I was reading :)

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featheredraven May 26 2011, 00:57:22 UTC
Anders fluff is a wonderful thing. And terribly fun to write!

I'm glad you enjoyed this! :D

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irvys_sefie May 26 2011, 00:57:32 UTC
I hereby adopt into my headcanon not only the existence of glorious, wonderful coffee as I know it, but where it comes from and how people get it. Sten, my good friend, my Warden is writing you a letter right now.

Anders fluff, why do you make my world go round? ♥

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featheredraven May 26 2011, 02:17:54 UTC
When the Warden doesn't get coffee, bad things happen. And then Sten doesn't get his cookies. :(

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sinick May 26 2011, 00:58:39 UTC
Dawww! Adorable!

You are so right, the world needs more fluffy Anders.

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featheredraven May 26 2011, 02:23:02 UTC
So much more fluff. His fluffy feathered pauldrons can only make up for so much. :D

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cowards_kiss May 26 2011, 02:04:20 UTC
This? This is adorable. I spent the entire time alternating between giggling like a small child and grinning maniacally.

And I agree with the whole "not enough Anders fluff" thing. There is never enough Anders fluff.

...Now I kind of want to go write Anders fluff. Hmm.

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featheredraven May 26 2011, 02:37:43 UTC
Do it! There needs to be more fluff! :D

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