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featheredraven

Fic: Thousand Suns

Jul 01, 2009 16:15

Title: Thousand Suns
Character(s): Kirk
Rating: G
Summary: The man and his ship, the ship and her captain, Kirk and the Enterprise, and he's never letting this go.
Notes: Short little fic, written fairly quickly and in one sitting. If you notice any mistakes/errors, let me know.

( He can reach them and touch them and hold them, and he can burn as bright as a sun. )

star trek

Comments 6

blcwriter July 1 2009, 23:50:50 UTC

Beautiful-- really.

There's some typos in the first par.: but he know, he know, he knows he can reach them.

featheredraven July 2 2009, 01:36:59 UTC

Thank you for pointing those out! I knew there were typos in there, somewhere.

And I'm glad you liked it.

rubynye July 2 2009, 00:23:30 UTC

This is, indeed, what we saw in his eyes at the shipyard. Beautifully written.

lizzybees July 2 2009, 02:55:59 UTC

This is the essence of the Jim we all know and love, right here. Wonderful, wonderful job!

sakka July 2 2009, 08:39:53 UTC

I love it - I've been looking for a good fic that describes the relationship between Kirk and the Enterprise and you hit the nail on the head EXACTLY. :) You chose the best words and made me feel what he must be feeling!

featheredraven July 2 2009, 20:53:33 UTC

Oh, I'm glad the wording worked! I haven't really written anything this stylized in awhile, so I wasn't certain if it made as much sense as I intended it to.

Kirk + Enterprise = <3