Comments | featheredraven: Fic: To Speak of the Symmetry

featheredraven

Fic: To Speak of the Symmetry

Jul 13, 2009 13:12

Title: To Speak of the Symmetry
Characters/Pairings: Spock/Uhura
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None, really. Fluffy-ish stuff.
Summary: He is not a poetic man; he cannot write sonnets about the color of her hair or the light in her eyes.
A/N: Short, Spock's POV. I'm a little hesitant about how well I captured him this time. Also, I hope I got my ( Read more... )

pairing: spock/uhura, star trek, fanfiction

Comments 18

2bluaeryn July 14 2009, 02:39:32 UTC

Spock may not be able to establish his thoughts as poetically as he thinks them, but he is right to know Nyota doesn't need that.

Beautiful piece, wonderful flowing poetry in its own right.

Well done!

tamarinadc July 14 2009, 02:41:01 UTC

Very nice- I agree with the other poster who thinks Spock is just being way too hard on himself. I look forward to reading more of your work!

fragilepixie411 July 14 2009, 03:30:24 UTC

This is beautiful. I love that they don't even need words to express their feelings towards each other. It's all about they eye language. ;D
Great job!

silverstcloud July 14 2009, 07:46:54 UTC

So beautiful...Loved this.

kapellmeister July 27 2009, 14:28:21 UTC

Beautiful. I loved it and definitely think that you captured him well. Its obvious that his emotions run deep even if they are not apparent on the surface. :-) -pets Spock-

Just one thing. I don't mean to be all nit-picky but you had a small typo:

"(He wonders what she though, at that moment.)"

No biggie. Just thought that you might want to know about it. Again, wonderful job!