replacements (kibum/donghae, eunhyuk/donghae)

[featherie]

Replacements
Kibum/Donghae, eventual!Eunhyuk/Donghae 
Humour, romance,angst | PG-13
2125 words
Don't own them

Notes: For pressthe_reset, because it is was her birthday on Thursday. :D Happy belated birthday bb; and please don't stab my eyeballs out after reading this. :/
Also, thanks to dip_eiffel_tea, for providing me with the sufficient amount of brain juice to figure the plot

Comments

[catskilt]

this is sort of gorgeous and heartbreaking and lovely all at the same time ♥ i love how you slowly revealed who kibum and hyukjae really were, and how donghae slowly develops feelings for hyukjae. the hyukhae dynamic in this was a scream, i loved the biting comebacks :D the final scenes of donghae flying are beautiful and the only complaint i have is that this ended too quickly alkjlkjh i want to know whether hyukjae would have to leave too ;___;

[featherie]

ashdj your comment makes me so happy ♥ thank you so much. :3 When I saw your comment I was practically steeling myself for crit (because crit comes in the form of long comments :'D) but then I read your comment and my face went from :/ to 8DD
I'm glad you noticed the biting comebacks and that flying scene and basically everything asdhdj I was so worried that it would come off as too fluffy - which it probably is, haha - and cliched. And about Hyukjae having to leave Donghae, he doesn't, because he isn't really tied to Heaven yet - he's training to be a guardian angel - so he has no need to be loyal.
Thanks again for the wonderful comment bb. :'D

[catskilt]

no way it would have been a crit *__* i have a habit of leaving long comments, lol, especially for fics that i enjoy. you are totally welcome.

lkadsjhkl but wouldn't hyuk have to leave once he became confirmed as a guardian angel? where would that leave donghae then? /obnoxious

[featherie]

:3 Thank you. Rofl Hyukjae would refuse to be promoted to Guardian Angel status, of course. They'd live a happy life together.

... Maybe I should write a sequel. :'D

[genisaurion]

WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS.

[genisaurion]

BRB FINDING MY HEART.

[genisaurion]

HYUKJAE, DID YOU STEAL IT?

[genisaurion]

THERE IT IS. WHY DID YOU BREAK IT.

(icon fail in previous post)

[purpleafterglow]

Beautiful (:
I loved it.

[thundersquall]

SDJKFGHKJSDGF YOU. ;______; HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO KIHAE. *SOBS*

Also wtf, this was not fail, what are you talking about? D: I'm bad as hell at things like concrit and certainly not as good a commenter as you are, but I loved this, it was heartwrenching. The beginning was so realistic, Hae with his 'imaginary friend', and the way he just breaks down when he realises Kibum isn't real. THE ANGST ;_____; I felt so much for Donghae. I must admit that I'm more of a KiHae person rather than a EunHae one, but Hyukjae is just the best thing here to mend Hae's heart.

... THIS WAS ALSO HELL OF A LOT LESS CLICHED AND CHEESY THAN MINE. ;____; BELIEVE ME, THIS WAS SO GOOD. ♥

[featherie]

I, UH, I'M SORRY. D: ASJFJDKGNR NGL I'M MORE OF A HYUKHAE PERSON, WHY DO NONE OF YOU LIKE THEM THEY ARE SO FULL OF OSM. ;__;

Omg you. :DD I've been anticipating this comment, you're such a wonderful person. /glomps. Personally I still think this pales in comparison to yours because your language and the words you use are just so pretty and descriptive and mine is... well, not compatible. /coughs

I THINK IT WOULD BE CLICHED IF I HADN'T MADE HYUKJAE A GUARDIAN ANGEL IN TRAINING. ;___;

[rain_beau]

it's so original , i love it !
but the angel concept thingy is kinda confusing .__.

[featherie]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. ♥
;___; how is it confusing?

[rain_beau]

ehh , i just didn't really understand the hyukkie being an angel too part.
why does he get to stay when kibum leaves?
and even though i absolutely love eunhae , i was confused how donghae got over kibum so quickly and kissed hyukjae after he hated him for so long .__.

[featherie]

Hyukjae died and was sent to heaven to train to be a guardian angel, and thus was sent to Earth to observe his fellow guardian angels in work. He receives a call from Kibum, saying that he's fallen in love with a mortal and that he needs Hyukjae to take over before he falls too hard. Kibum returns to Heaven and Hyukjae takes over him.

Donghae was never in love with Kibum; he loved Kibum as a friend. He never exactly hated Hyukjae, you can tell by his character that it's hard to hate anyone? He only disliked Hyukjae because of his biting remarks and teasing, and only started to think otherwise when Hyukjae comforted him when he was feeling down. And after that they fell in love.

I hope my explanation helps! :)