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featherie

dreams (kangin/leeteuk)

Apr 22, 2010 06:31

Dreams
Kangin/Leeteuk
Romance; AU; PG-13
1998 words
Leeteuk has vivid dreams, Kangin more often than not makes an appearance in them.
Don't own them
For sycoraxsnow, happy belated birthday bb, I'm sorry for taking so long. D:

( He reclines into the embrace, finds his place in the body behind him, and just like that, the scene becomes wisps of velvet purple and sapphire coloured crystals - fantasies. )

!fanfiction, r: pg-13, p: kangin/leeteuk, f: super junior

Comments 31

featherie April 21 2010, 22:36:34 UTC

sycoraxsnow

I hope you enjoyed it; I kind of strayed off 'space' and an angsty ending. D: It just didn't suit. AND HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY. \o/

sycoraxsnow April 22 2010, 13:20:21 UTC

Ah, this doesn't need beta'ing =D (which may suggest I'm blind or something XD) it's wonderful =D
and what do you mean it didn't flow? That's all it did, gently flow from one moment into the next, gently and in a dream-like manor. I really like how you wrote the imagery because it was really easy to imagine things, the place of Teuk's dream, Kangin's house, the tousled bed...
And I guess the implications behind the dream or the reality OF the dream...
Ah it was really really pleasant to read in a sleepy manor, at your own pace as the story brought up images and I lay back (in a sense XD) and watched them dance on the walls~
I'd really love to know what your original idea was and so on =)
Thanks so much for writing this and wanting it to be on time, you did a great job =D
(and I'm totally mem'ing and NOT just cause it's for me ; ) )

sycoraxsnow April 22 2010, 13:27:32 UTC

I think I should add that I read this in an awake state XD cause I did read it last night while totally trying not to face-plant on the keyboard, true but I read this today too, in a sitting position and fully aware and I still got the feelings I described in the comment above =D (WHICH DOES NOT MEAN UR STORY NEARLY MADE ME FALL ASLEEP XD)
I think your language was very very good and little details like the fact that the stars would freeze his fingers, are really cool and create a universe of their own (which was the intention XD), solidifying it more~giving it its own lore
(and I'll totally spazz more on msn with you, y/y?)

featherie April 22 2010, 13:50:03 UTC

Adjekakcls I WILL REPLY PROPERLY WHEN I'M NOT USING MY IPOD. :D And I might not be coming on msn today, studying is taking too much of my time. ;__;

Thread 10

13loodyangel April 22 2010, 00:54:46 UTC

Off to read
What happens with Leeteuk? O_O

featherie April 22 2010, 12:50:36 UTC

Thanks for reading ♥ What happens to him?

prototypic April 22 2010, 13:05:02 UTC

sjdkfjasldf DONT YOU THINK THERE SHOULD BE A PART TWO TO THIS >|

i want more gdi. i've forgotten how to give proper and lovely comments but rararawrrrr this is so beautiful. it's kinda dreamy and idk that gives a wonderful, surreal feel to the story. idk idk idk memming

featherie April 22 2010, 13:12:14 UTC

UM UM UM YES? :D

Do I detect a little Lady Gaga in your comment adjfkdkxhfks. Thank you bb, I was hoping for that kind of feel but when I proof read it, it just seemed really idk, plain and trying-too-hard. ;___; Aww thanks again Kayeeeee ♥

prototypic April 22 2010, 13:18:34 UTC

yay /throws confetti. when when when when!

maybeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. nah, it didn't seem plain or trying too hard. you're too harsh on yourself :)

featherie April 22 2010, 13:35:49 UTC

;____; In the June holidays? MUGGING LIKE CRAP NOW. D:

Ily ♥ AND YOUR TEUKIE ICON IS SO GAY. 8D!

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kangfany April 22 2010, 13:31:29 UTC

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WHEN DID YOU BECOME SUCH A GOOD WRITER?

I read this yesterday and I second the notion for a sequel! D< But dude, all of this was so nice. I loved it to bits and it definitely did have that dreamy feel about it. You did so well bb. ♥

featherie April 22 2010, 13:55:44 UTC

SO I WASN'T A GOOD ONE BACK THEN, HUH. ;__; Which I indefinitely agree to >/

...a sequel? D: I'll try my best. \o/ And thanks for the lovely comment bb. ♥

xiaoninger April 25 2010, 00:58:38 UTC

this is possibly the coolest thing in the world
or in two worlds IDK IT FUCKED WITH MY HEAD AND I LIKED IT
because, WOW, that was amazing, and the little realization of leeteuk's at the end was like !! and i think i got it but didnt get it but does that mean i get it--long story short, this was beautiful. im itching for you to expand this plot or something, cause it rocks man ;A; rocks. i fell in love with that other world of kangin's. beautiful. <3

featherie April 25 2010, 07:57:20 UTC

WAIT WAIT THIS WASN'T SUPPOSED TO MESS WITH YOUR HEAD. D: Lmao thanks for the spazzy comment bb, what do you not get? And omg why is everyone asking me to write a sequel ;___; But thank you, Kangin's 'world' technically isn't a real parallel world, it's just Teuk's imagination. ♥