Comments | feathertofly: fic: one direction - harry/louis

feathertofly

fic: one direction - harry/louis - it gives a lovely light

Jan 09, 2013 08:37

title: it gives a lovely light
pairing: harry styles/louis tomlinson
word count: 5k
disclaimer: i own neither les miserables nor any of the people mentioned. i wish. title from a few figs from thistles by edna st. vincent millay.
summary: as it had been since they were children, harry stands with his feet solidly planted between louis and the smart ( Read more... )

procrastinators of the world unite!, oh shit i caught the direction infection, i am a writer of fiction, fic, cass is ridiculous, writing is hard

Comments 6

raeschae January 9 2013, 19:38:58 UTC

I can't even ... I want to hate you right now, but I kind of love you more than ever, for two reasons:

1.) the sun is beginning to set before him, and harry has his arms stretched out like he’s pulling it down single handedly. For lines like this because, what bb? What? Beautiful. Lyrical. You made me tear up at one point and that does not happen ever. Just ... yeah.

Also,
2.) You could have easily caved to the temptation to take the easy way out, to swerve and leave even a sliver of hope that things might end differently, but you stuck to your guns (no pun intended) and wrote what was an infinitely better ending. I admire that as I've never been able to accomplish it myself.

feathertofly January 9 2013, 23:11:56 UTC

so i know we've been talking about this but i still just want to fawn all over this. I'M SO GLAD THAT YOU LIKED IT and that it worked and that you got what i wanted you to get and, lyrical, seriously. you flatter me too much. :)))

and i can't take full credit for the ending, victor hugo had a lot of feelings on the subject ;)

lesson_in_love January 10 2013, 05:16:21 UTC

h8 u 5ever.

no but seriously this is beautiful as fuck and super poignant and painfully lovely and I DON'T READ MAIN CHARACTER DEATH BECAUSE IT MAKES ME INCOHERENT WITH SADNESS AND IT'S SO MUCH WORSE BECAUSE I FINALLY SAW THE MOVIE TODAY AND JESUS CHRIST CASS YOU OWE ME A BOTTLE OF BLEACH FOR THIS SHIT.

feathertofly January 10 2013, 16:11:25 UTC

oh, no joke. i don't read character death EVER, especially not in this fandom. but it's not like i could make them not die, as much as i wanted to. THEY JUST HAD TO GO, THEY WERE TOO BORED TO LIVE.

you only just saw it??? WHAT DID YOU THINK?? can we talk about how everything is so painful and perfect and i can't even stand it?

i'm so glad you thought it was beautiful, even if it ruined your life <3333

babygotbass January 10 2013, 05:23:02 UTC

Well. This was gut wrenching, even knowing what was coming. Louis putting words to those feelings was too much. Gaaaah.

feathertofly January 13 2013, 20:27:37 UTC

that was the worst/best part of the movie for me, too, KNOWING exactly how things would end and still being so moved by it. it was just... UGH.

thank you so much for reading! :)