Happy birthday, Sora-chan.

[feathertongue]

One, two, three.

One, two, three.

One, two, three.

It's just him and the flag, and the flap of the wind against the bright fabric. It's just him and the flag, with the spin and the flash.

He could get lost in it.

He spins the flag, faster and higher, back-hand, flip, twist, slam! Back-hand, flip, twist, slam! It clouds his mind, this

Comments

[sei_yuu]

I have no idea who the characters are, but I have to say, the style is unmistakable Bradbury. (Which means this is a compliment, because for all that literature teachers say that his writing wasn't quite polished, it certainly had a searing visceral impact.)

[feathertongue]

Glad you caught onto the fact.

Oh, his writing was typical of a short story -- not as much for a novel. But I did write it during the Bradbury Era of Literature.

[sei_yuu]

...Are you being impertinent with me? XD

(Well, in case you WEREN'T attempting to mimic his style, I didn't want to insult you. Though I don't see how comparing you to Bradbury could be an insult...)