Paroxysm.

[febrezy]

Yeah, so I have to write a poem for English. I'm not good at poetry. My English teacher says I should be great at poetry since I'm such a great writer <<; and shit but I still find poetry difficult. But I got the poem done already (and it was just assigned today o_o). I want some opinions on it, 'cause I still have a few days before it's due. So if

Comments

[missnhaca]

*feels like I stalker for reading this right when you posted it*

I like it. That's so ironic because in Lit we're doing poetry right now too.

*eyes your poem* You make me inferior. ♥♥♥

I want to post the part I liked best, but I cant choose because I like it all. :D

[febrezy]

XD It's cool, it makes me feel loved. ♥

Yey ^o^! Ahha, that's pretty sweet, though.

Pff, nonsense. I suck at poetry.

^o^ Maybe it isn't as much of a failure as I initially thought it was. ♥♥♥

[missnhaca]

It's very very very very very good darling. Stop that insecurity complex because you bomb at poems.

If you think that's bad... I'm afraid to see you try at good.

♥♥♥

[febrezy]

XDDD Okay okay. I own hardcore at writing poems. Happy? ♥♥♥

[jjmywhore]

I dont get poetry just like i dont care for Liderature. But I most say that Poem (I was about to write Fic) is weird. I mean, is it directed at love, some one being abused mentaly by some1 they love or a Child being picked on by family ? O_o please correct me if I'am wrong, I'm very slow and well I might not even be close to what ur talking about!! But I like it very much for the word u invole in it. Like i said dont quet get the meaning but yes U seem to make it so out there.

I like but yeah...what else Umm...OH YEAH ARE U ON?

[febrezy]

Jay, you know what it's about. Just think about it, read the lines carefully, and read between the lines. Because you are completely off. XD It does have to do with love, but it has more to do with pain. Look at the lines. The lift of an appalling secret long kept. The feeling of being yourself again. You do know what this is about. You just need to concentrate on it more. ♥

AND NO I'M NOT. I'm at my sisters on her computer. =D

[jjmywhore]

OMG I JUST GOT IT T_T you didnt even have to tell me thoes lines >.< Right when u said I knew what it was about I KNEW!!

Wow I have to RE-read it so i can really make it out...Other then just to know what it was based on!!

[febrezy]

Told ya you know. XD So how you doing? Figure it out completely yet?

[___iwritesins]

hi. i love you and your poetry.

and i really dont know what to say.

[febrezy]

XD Maybe I wont make any changes to it. Everyone seems to like it. o_o;

Do you know what it's about? I know you do. ^^*

[___iwritesins]

dont make any changes to it! it is perfect

ive got a feeling i know what its about. ^^

and speaking of poetry, i have to write a poem describing myself. fuckin english teachers and their fuckin poetry. =_=;;;; i cannot write poetry at allll. -_-;

[febrezy]

Okay. ^^*

And that feeling is probably right. Just refer to the comment I left jjmywhore about it.

AHAHAHAHA OH GAWD I would so die if I had to write a poem about MYSELF. I would be like, "Hell no, foo,' who you think I am?" Luckly, we only have to write two poems. The second one is about any topic of our own choice. I'm not sure what I'll write about yet.