I'm so happy to hear that you enjoy this part my dear! Here's some good news...just posted the next part up! Enjoy and don't forget to let me know what you think!!
Oh my freakin God! You are killing me here! Well. my theory of who the leak is was wrong, you got me there. So much intensity in this chapter! Fantastic chapter! Thank you.
Who was your leak??? Now that you know who the rat was... I would like to hear your theory as well!! :-)
I always planned for Rosenbaum to be the leak...he conviently took over Jensen's old job when Jensen left the Bureau. I didn't really mentioned him that much b/c he wasn't really on the radar. We did meet him when Aldis spoke to him about leaving for Texas for medical reasons....I know...tiny clues I put in the story!! :-) My evil plan aside from driving you crazy over the cliff hangers is to get you to reread the story!! :-P
I was thinking Day was the leak. Still don't trust her sending Jensen there. I love what you've done with Josh Hartnell though. I didn't trust him at the beginning, unless he is working to destroy the whole team by leading them to where Jensen is?!? Now I'm plotting!! LOL
Wow as told from everyone's pov you feel jensen talking to them and about them i love how mark is so protective of jeffrey and chris is finally realizing that jensen was in fact training him to take over for him.
now jared blaming felicia for what consenting adults did and how her mother was exploiting the fact that they were lovers back in the day is not fair to her she didn't ask for her mother to be her mother.
now this may sound mean spirited but if josh got himself killed it's good for him he still don't get it. you have people who care about you yet you still are acting like a one man team he went off have cocked not knowing the situation he goes barging into an unknown situation. jensen wouldn't allow that!
Excellent post looking forward to more......................
This part really showcase how much Jensen had impacted on each of the character's life. I love writing Mark and Jeff interactions...they are like the old married couple except they are not! LOL. I they always make me chuckle.
Jared and Felicia got history. Family history. There is a whole section of the story that deals with Jared's mystery. He has his own story. We just haven't gotten into it b/c of the whole darn Angel Killer! But we will!! We will defintely get to learn more about Jared and his family.
Josh is not used to working in a team. He's always depended on working by himself so he runs off alone doing stuff. If Jensen was here he would defintely be yelling at Josh.
Here is some good news... just posted part 20!! enjoy and don't forget to let me know what you think!!
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I'm so happy to hear that you enjoy this part my dear! Here's some good news...just posted the next part up! Enjoy and don't forget to let me know what you think!!
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Here's some good news...just posted the next part up!! We will see the confrontation!! Enjoy and don't forget to let me know what you think!
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I always planned for Rosenbaum to be the leak...he conviently took over Jensen's old job when Jensen left the Bureau. I didn't really mentioned him that much b/c he wasn't really on the radar. We did meet him when Aldis spoke to him about leaving for Texas for medical reasons....I know...tiny clues I put in the story!! :-) My evil plan aside from driving you crazy over the cliff hangers is to get you to reread the story!! :-P
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now jared blaming felicia for what consenting adults did and how her mother was exploiting the fact that they were lovers back in the day is not fair to her she didn't ask for her mother to be her mother.
now this may sound mean spirited but if josh got himself killed it's good for him he still don't get it. you have people who care about you yet you still are acting like a one man team he went off have cocked not knowing the situation he goes barging into an unknown situation. jensen wouldn't allow that!
Excellent post looking forward to more......................
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Jared and Felicia got history. Family history. There is a whole section of the story that deals with Jared's mystery. He has his own story. We just haven't gotten into it b/c of the whole darn Angel Killer! But we will!! We will defintely get to learn more about Jared and his family.
Josh is not used to working in a team. He's always depended on working by himself so he runs off alone doing stuff. If Jensen was here he would defintely be yelling at Josh.
Here is some good news... just posted part 20!! enjoy and don't forget to let me know what you think!!
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