Thanks for your comments on the 8-ball scene. I wasn't sure how it would come across - it seemed like such a neat idea, but one is never sure of the execution, so I'm glad to know it worked for you.
Evil singing children creep me out too - even when I was writing it I was feeling very uncomfortable. And the lyrics to the evil versions of the childhood nursrey rhymes... just perverse!
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"Beaver-faced" Teddy Adams is a great image, and the whole exchange with the 8-ball is excellent. Very much looking forward to more!
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