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Fic: Tentación (Flones) - Chapter Five

Oct 04, 2009 20:32

Title: Tentación (temptation)
Author: Me, Diana
Pairing: Flones
Genre: smut/fluff
Summary: Tom met Kelsey in a school meeting where he worked.They went to Florida on holidays with Kelsey's son, Daniel.There was where Tom started to pay more attention to the little boy.
Rating: this chapter is 15
Notes: This fic is inspired by the film ''Lolita'', ( Read more... )

mcfly: slash, mcfly: fic, mcfly: flones

Comments 8

asu_chan October 4 2009, 20:46:27 UTC

Awww...I'm so happy you put a new chapter up! *yaaaaay*

You already know it but I love your fic! ♥

His tongue did circles on it and then bit a little portion. It was like porn for Tom and he couldn’t help but lick his own lips, wanting to do bad things to the young boy.
*-* I love it. I hope some day Tom will do bad things to him and not only thinking about it. ♥

But Daniel didn’t reply back to her and Tom gave the girl an angry face to let her know that Daniel wasn’t going to do anything with her. The shocked girl just looked down at the napkin in her lap.
Safe to say, she didn’t look at Daniel again for the rest of the night.
*ehehe* I love jealousy. 1:0 for Tom! *thumbs up*

And the end was soooooo cute! <3
Daniel was the most beautiful person he had ever seen in his whole life, now he knew.
♥ ♥

I'm so excited and looking forward to the next chapter/s! ♥ ♥ ♥

feelingscanshow October 4 2009, 21:34:55 UTC

I am sooo glad you like it, it means a lot!
thank you so much for your comment and for telling me which parts are your favorites :D
♥ ♥

asu_chan October 6 2009, 05:45:17 UTC

And thank you always for your reply. ♥

I love making quotes so I'm glad you like it when I do. :)

♥

q_rai October 4 2009, 21:25:14 UTC

Aww poor boys *hugs* I hope they will end up happy and together :D
The end is ♥

I love this fic! You made me very happy with the new chapter!! ♥

feelingscanshow October 4 2009, 21:41:34 UTC

thank you so much bb!
I'm so glad you like it ! :D if it made you happy it makes me happy haha
♥♥

q_rai October 5 2009, 17:56:43 UTC

:D ♥

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feelingscanshow October 8 2009, 20:41:00 UTC

awww thank you so much for your amazing comment!*-*
I am so glad you like it.
:DDDDDDDDDDDD

irrelevantduh September 19 2010, 03:59:31 UTC

i know im a year late, but is there any chance youll ever continue this?

i just read through it all and i love it! toms a pervvvvvvvv but what can you do? lol

update if you can, if not, i guess just know that im a fan haha