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Fic: The Real You (1/?)

Oct 16, 2010 23:33

Title: The Real You
Author: Babette babettew54
Category: Smallville
Rating: PG
Word Count:1,600
Summary: What if Future!Clark had witnessed the kiss on the rooftop, what would be his reaction?
Spoilers: Homecoming 10.04
A/N: This story takes place after the episode Homecoming. You should watch that episode to understand these scenes. You know, it’s ( Read more... )

fic: the real you

Comments 27

padmekent October 17 2010, 04:46:48 UTC

LOL Clark's jealous of himself, which oddly fits. I think she was so wrapped up in protecting him & having endured a lot of crazy kryptonite during the years XD and that she probably thought that if what 2010!Clark was saying was true that 2017!Clark would have told her something beforehand.

babettew54 October 17 2010, 05:06:03 UTC

LOL! That's probably true, and after I posted this, I began to wonder if Lois was acting the entire time. I wouldn't put it past her, but wow, she's a good actress! Both Lois and Erica!

But I like to think she didn't know, it definitely added to the fun!

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and as I said, there may be more, I hope so!:D

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babettew54 October 17 2010, 14:12:06 UTC

Oh my, your icon is giving me ideas about 'married views'!!

Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reviewing!:D

tbt93 October 17 2010, 14:39:31 UTC

OKay this was an amazing Clark and Louis are so cute togehter this fic was funny and sweet you did an awesome job you must do lost more you really get Clark and Louis I felt like I was watching it on tv I really enjoyed reading it!!!! :) *giggles and hugs*

You're amazing!!!! :)

babettew54 October 17 2010, 14:50:25 UTC

I felt like I was watching it on tv I really enjoyed reading it!!!! :)

Aww, then I succeeded. I really try to set the scene for them like it was a TV show, as if it were really happening. This was fun, but it didn't start out that way. I didn't want it to be too serious for them.

Thanks again for the lovely compliment! :D

ancarett October 17 2010, 16:56:49 UTC

I was wondering what would be the fallout for Future!Lois and Future!Clark of this encounter. Wonder no more, though, for you wrote it perfectly!

babettew54 October 17 2010, 17:34:11 UTC

Aww, thank you so much for saying that, means a lot.

And you know, that kiss was pretty intense and very sexy and if future!Clark witnessed it, wow, what must have gone through his mind. He probably thought Lois wouldn't take it that far, but Lois is completely unpredictable and he should know that by now!!

Thanks, hon, for reviewing. Sorry, again about that problem. *hugs*

ancarett October 17 2010, 17:56:47 UTC

Yes, Lois had some 'splaining to do after Clark did his 'splaining. You had fun with that!

And, hey, just glad to be able to leave my review for such a fun story. You're an amazing writer!

babettew54 October 17 2010, 18:29:20 UTC

Aww, you're so nice to me! *hugs*

It was fun as you can tell. Lois is usually pretty sharp, but when it comes to Clark ... blind in so many ways! I guess you never know with these two!

Thanks so much for the compliment..!! :D

ctbn60 October 17 2010, 18:08:16 UTC

LOL!! This was awesome. I can so see clark being jealous of himself for some odd reason it really works for me. Loved this! Very cute.

babettew54 October 17 2010, 18:21:48 UTC

*LOL* That's Lois for ya, completely unpredictable, especially when it comes to kissing him. He should have known better. He was asking for trouble!! *LOL*

I'm glad you liked it, thanks!:D It was fun writing this, and as I said, there could very well be more! :D