Fic: The Real You (2/?)

Oct 23, 2010 05:36

Title: The Real You (2/?)
Author: Babette babettew54
Category: Smallville (AU)
Characters: Lois/Clark, Perry White
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2,000
Summary: What if Future!Clark had witnessed the kiss on the rooftop, what would be his reaction?
Spoilers: None.
A/N:  Please try and remember, this is not the couple from last night, this is Future!Clois and ( Read more... )

fic: the real you

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athena606 October 26 2010, 02:31:25 UTC
awwww love how you threw in some angst there. great job... and awww clark you know she lovesssss you!!! can't wait to read more

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babettew54 October 26 2010, 09:08:51 UTC
Angst is not my forte, I try to avoid it as much as possible, but this scenario calls out for it, and it was fun to think about them as not being perfect and having issues like everyone else! :D

Clark knows how much she loves him, but he is confused and hurt by Lois's actions, even though he seemed to understand yesterday why it happened, but it's just a combination of things that pushed him to make a change in his appearance.

Hugs Future!Clois!! :D Thanks for coming over hon, update later this week!! :D

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ctbn60 October 30 2010, 01:19:39 UTC
I do feel badly for Clark. I can understand what he's saying and to be honest Clark was pretty insecure so i can see this being an issue for him. I'm sure you will get them to work it out though.

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babettew54 October 30 2010, 01:52:18 UTC
Thanks, hon! I really tried to show his insecurities even though they have been married a while, and I will be touching on those issues a little later in the story, so folks can understand it a little better.

They will work this out, with help from Lois and her 'plan'!!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!:D

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moonshinefaerie November 4 2010, 09:38:38 UTC
GAH. ANGRY!CLARK. NO. ;.;

Lmao. Oh geez. That image of Clark did me in. Damn you and your muscles, KENT. D:

No wait, nevermind. Hee.

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babettew54 November 4 2010, 10:33:06 UTC
I know, Clark and his jealous moods!!

*hee* I loved writing him in a new image, new clothes, and with'muscles' too!! I had no problem picturing him that way. It was a lot of fun!!

Thanks again! :D

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