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Fic: The Real You (3/?)

Oct 29, 2010 08:50

Title: The Real You (3/?)
Author: Babette babettew54
Category: Smallville (AU)
Characters: Lois/Clark, Perry White, Inspector Henderson
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1,700
Summary: What if Future!Clark had witnessed the kiss on the rooftop, what would be his reaction?
Spoilers: None.
A/N: In this next chapter, Lois and Clark are at an impasse, but leave it ( Read more... )

fic: the real you

Comments 12

paradisekendra October 29 2010, 15:20:59 UTC

OMG! That was awesome. I love Perry! Now I don't know if this is canon or fanon, but was Perry in the comic world this much of a friend to Lois and Clark, or was that more of an adaptation of the 90s Lois and Clark series???

This was gorgeous, honey, and I can't wait to see what Lois is up to. But she's always up to something, which is why we love her.

I love that Clark apologized and she seems to be listening. I like that you write them mature, again, not kids in highschool. Come on, now, SV. :)

And again, Perry was awesome. Love your version of him.

babettew54 October 29 2010, 15:32:06 UTC

Humm, a little of both I think. Perry is awesome, I agree, and I could see him taking them both under his wing, mentoring them, caring about them, especially after finding out the truth!! And of course, Perry would find out, that's a given!

Yeah, they are adults, but SV treats them like they have no hormones!! Only a few times we get to see what's underneath, a few looks and touches! One day, maybe!! *sigh*

Thanks hon!!:D:D

paradisekendra October 29 2010, 15:51:29 UTC

I was under the "impression" from comic book readers that Perry was a bit more like J. Jonah Jameson, AKA Spiderman, much more rough and not their surrogate father, but I could be wrong!

Either way, I loved the Teri and Dean Superman version of Perry!

And yes, I want our Clois to have some hormones, have some lust for each other. And I don't even know if Harvest will deliver on that. Come on! You could write some, though. *hint hint*

babettew54 October 29 2010, 16:04:16 UTC

You could write some, though. *hint hint*

HAHA!! It's coming, it's coming... be patient!!

Underneath Perry is gruff and tough, but I like to think of him as the L&C version. Oh, well! It works here, I think!!

Harvest appears to have 'the hookup' but who knows if that was real, a dream, or what? CW is famous for stuff like that! :D

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ctbn60 October 30 2010, 01:24:20 UTC

Perry is so awesome. So what the heck is lois planning??? Sometimes her plans get her into a lot of trouble. I'm sure the inspector wouldn't help her if it was dangerous though. I can't wait to see what it is. Great chapter honey!

babettew54 October 30 2010, 02:01:50 UTC

No, it's not dangerous, but ...!! No, I'm not telling!!

I will admit that the idea came to me out of the blue, but then I realized how perfect it will be!! Lois is brilliant!! *heee* I can't wait for you to read it!!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!! :D

eternal_moonie October 30 2010, 17:10:43 UTC

ABSOLUTELY love it honey! Well done!! Can't wait for the next chapter!

babettew54 October 30 2010, 17:26:13 UTC

Thank you!! Update soon! I'm very excited about the next few chapters!! :D:D

moonshinefaerie November 4 2010, 09:41:38 UTC

Oh... they are so cute when they feel so bad. Hah. Best couples always have those tremendous emotional scales that go from 0 to 50 in less that a second. XD

babettew54 November 4 2010, 10:36:28 UTC

Oh, I do agree with that and Lois and Clark are no different, especially with the type of lives they lead.

I'm glad you saw the point I was making with this!!

Thank you! :D