Fic: The Real You (5/5)

Nov 06, 2010 19:43

Title: The Real You (5/5)
Author: Babette babettew54
Category: Smallville (AU)
Characters: Lois/Clark, Perry White, Inspector Henderson
Rating: M
Word Count: 2,300 (9,500 FINAL!)
Summary: What if Future!Clark had witnessed the kiss on the rooftop, what would be his reaction?
Spoilers: None.
A/N: I have to say that I really did not see this coming when ( Read more... )

fandom: smallville (2001-2011), fic: the real you

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eternal_moonie November 7 2010, 00:21:53 UTC
okay, I'm not gonna lie... but I totally LOVE this series. Which is chapter 1,2,3,4 and this one, 5.

The only thing that has me to the point of killing myself is the lack of my so called 'friends' reviewing my stories.

Keep up the good and awesome work honey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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babettew54 November 7 2010, 00:35:21 UTC
I'm glad you liked it hon!!

*hides*!! TVD is something I want to read.

It's not slash is it!!?? :D:D

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eternal_moonie November 7 2010, 01:02:24 UTC
Well, the latest... yes, it's slash, but not until Chapter 4 and 5! The ones before aren't slash... lemme reiterate... 1) Lexi with male, nope, second: Jeremy/Anna, nope, third: male who mistakes Katherine for Elena... all those are straight. :D:D:D

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babettew54 November 7 2010, 01:38:13 UTC
Ok, the first three chapters! Got it! Thanks for letting me know!! *hugs*

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jlvsclrk November 7 2010, 05:55:43 UTC
Such a wonderful story, and I love the ending.

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babettew54 November 7 2010, 10:26:22 UTC
Aww, thank you so much, so did I! *smiles*

Thank you for coming over to read and review! :D

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paradisekendra November 7 2010, 06:08:51 UTC
Beautiful ending, sweetie! I loved it. I loved the way they were, it was fantastic. Always love a pregnancy-fic. Happy!!!

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babettew54 November 7 2010, 10:28:04 UTC
Aww, I wanted to thank you for your little 'suggestion'!! It was just what it needed to spice it up!! *smiles*

Thanks hon! :D:D

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paradisekendra November 7 2010, 19:03:01 UTC
LOL, I'll just remind of you that for every fic! I do that to myself. Why are all of mine high rated? Do you know how exhausted I am??? Haha. It was gorgeous! And it did spice it up, I'm being honest. If you'd just "ended it", it would've seemed less mature between THEM. I would've doubted her pregnancy, LMAO. They're ADULTS! Right?

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babettew54 November 7 2010, 19:54:22 UTC
*LOL* Doubted her pregnancy!?? We're talking seven hours of sex here!?? Clark is the man, he has no problems with that!!! *LOL*

Yes, they are mature adults in a mature and caring relationship, and yes, the sex needed to be front and center, I agree with you, for reals, hon!! :D:D *LOL*

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ctbn60 November 7 2010, 15:12:29 UTC
Awww a baby!! Now this is an exciting and scary time. This is the perfect ending to this story. I really enjoyed this one honey!! Well done.

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babettew54 November 7 2010, 15:41:37 UTC
I know, happy sighs!! I really felt like my readers needed something to make everyone deliriously happy for them, since I tore them apart a little, and this is what I came up with!!

I'm so glad you liked it hon!! Thanks so much for coming over to read and review!! *hugs*

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repmetsyrrah November 8 2010, 10:20:43 UTC
I totally thought I had already reviewed this? Huh.

Anyway :P LOVED IT! Glad Lois and Clark worked things out completely but I knew you wouldn't let them not end up together :P

Can't wait for your next fic! :P

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babettew54 November 8 2010, 10:43:44 UTC
Aww, thank you!! Well, now come on, it's Clois!!

Thanks, sweetie! I can't wait either! Now, if only I had a fic in mind!?

Not at the moment! Oh, well, maybe tomorrow!?

*hugs*

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