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ctbn60 July 27 2011, 00:52:45 UTC
oh boy! talk about ending things on a bang! I'll be good and wait for the next chapter. This one was great. Love the action and the ending. You did an amazing job!!

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babettew54 July 27 2011, 01:39:08 UTC
Thank you hon!! I'm glad you thought it played out well. This chapter drove me around the bend and back but I truly enjoyed playing out the scene in my head and putting it on paper!! :D

It won't be long for the next chapter...!! Only a few days..!! :D:D

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repmetsyrrah July 29 2011, 09:38:02 UTC
So how old is Hal here? Has he just recently gotten the ring?

I loved his distracting of Clark too, and Clark response of "we are not going to discuss Jane and how lovely she is" made me smile :P

But the end ADJFK!?! OMG!! GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!

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babettew54 July 29 2011, 11:43:38 UTC
*lol* I have no idea how old he is, but I think it's kinda cool to have him in the future and of course, I had to bring Carol along with him in this timeline. As far as how long it's been ... several months since he got the ring.

*lol* I liked that line too! I always try to distract Clark with thoughts of women confusing him and thinking about you know what! They did just have sex like an hour ago!! *heee*

I know, EEEEEKKK!!! Stay tuned! :D

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eternal_moonie July 29 2011, 18:28:31 UTC
ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!

SOOOO GOOD!!!

Must need more!

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babettew54 July 29 2011, 19:15:01 UTC
I'm so happy you enjoyed it! It was tough going with this one. I hope it made sense!!

Ohhh, can't wait for you to read the next chapter!! *iz so excited*! :D:D

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