To Be Human {Chapter 17}

[fel93]

To Be Human {Chapter 17}
Title: To Be Human
Author: fel93
Length: Chaptered (1461 words for this chapter)
Pairing: Ohmiya, Sakuraiba
Rating: PG-13
Genre: AU, Drama, Fantasy, Futuristic, Angst, Romance
Disclaimer: Nuh-uh, sadly, they’re not mine
Summary: What happens when Ohno gets lost, and meets someone who is not quite like him

Comments

[dn_nura]

I had to read the chapter twice because I cannot believe Ohno is playing the piano o.O The flow for this chapter is expected after reading chapter 16. Except for the last paragraph. I wonder what had happened to Nino, to the point even Jun is scared.

Overall I am thinking is Ohno's grandma has something to do / contributed to this whole robot and wisp tree things? Cant help thinking like this because she has appeared in more than 2-3 chapters and I wondered if there is more to that than being Ohno's pillar. Hmmmmm.. thinking too much already =P Looking forward to the next chapter!

[fel93]

Hahaha! While I wrote this, I was reminded of the time Ohno tried playing Niji during the Arashi camp! I couldn't stop laughing! xD So in my fic, I shall let him be able to play the piano :D

Heh, that's a good point! Ohno's grandma appeared multiple times! Hee. (:

Would you all prefer short chapters but quicker updates, or longer chapters but it will take a few weeks or even months? HAHA

Thanks for reading and commenting! Really appreciate it! ^^

[dn_nura]

I do not mind at all, whether its a quick update or long update. As long as there is a update =)

Maybe if comes a time when you need to have a long time before the next update, just post a quick note to mention that it will take some time for the next update. I highly appreciate quality work. So I would understand where time is needed =D

[fel93]

That sounds good! Thanks for the feedback! ^^

[coolohoh]

what??? just what happened to nino?

[fel93]

Heh, apparently, I just love torturing them :p

Thanks for reading and commenting like always! ^^

[vikyfaxerfeit]

ahahah Ohno's playing the piano!! I imagined Granma's lullaby as a creepy Niji melody xD
Ok, now Ohno misunderstood Nino's feelings from what I read. Why is he so stupid?? >.< but...what happened to Nino??? O.O Was he in that state because of his broken heart?? Or maybe the lullaby has something to do with his state???
Ok I stop with the questions xD
I look forward for the next chapter ;)

[fel93]

HAHA omg the creepy niji!! I couldn't stop laughing when i watched tt video, i swear! xD

The more important Nino is to Ohno, the more hurt he'd be and the larger his reaction! So i guess Nino is pretty important to Ohno! (:

Heh! All will be revealed! :D But the plot is predictable (Cos im not a very good plotter >< heee)

THanks for reading and commenting like always!! See you next chapter! :D

[reisakurano]

OMG I´m so sorry for this very late comment D: ;w;
Forgive me <3

god I had to read the last 3 chapters in a row because I wasn´t at home the last days and hadn´t find some time to read.
But O M G~ so many feels ;^;
poor Ohchan.. and I couldn´t belive that Jun is a traitor~ and TADA .. he´s not =D cute thing!
iusdjcnsduh I´m so curious about the next~ What´s happened to NIno??? D:

[fel93]

It's okay!! This is not late at all!! All comments are never too late! I really appreciate that you comment after reading! :D

HAHA was it a pleasant surprise to find 3 chapters waiting to be read? :D

WHEEE so much feels! ^^ heheh read on to find out! :D

THanks for reading and commenting like always! <3

[reisakurano]

TOO MANY FEELS!!! <3<3

It was wonderful to read 3 chapters in one row xDD but then it stopped D: but.. I.. have to wait xDD
owusfcbnspöodcgszdhj !!!

aww sure I will read it till the very end!! <3<3

and now I have to update my ereader xDD

[farah_hamiza]

Seriously, I cannot wait for the next update. I really want to know what makes Nino looks so angry!

[fel93]

Hahaha yay I managed to get you hooked! Hehe!

I hope to tell you more in the next update too! See you next chapter! :D

Thanks for reading and commenting! ^^